| "Answered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: NN On: June 27, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK please write more please ! |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!!!!!!
How often does a mom help a guy out to make her un-wed daughter in "the mood" to have sex? still, that is quite different the whole on-one-knee-proposal-to-screw thing.
More!!!!!!!!!! your life can wait, type, dammit!!! |
Reviewed By: pops On: June 27, 2003 05:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep writing please |
Reviewed By: speelin On: June 27, 2003 05:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more chapters |
Reviewed By: mishisama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARG! Damn, no hentai yet. But you do have a very good set up. Can't wait for part three.
The suggestion I have is to double check your grammar and spelling. MOst of the mistakes in that area are easily overlooked. |
Reviewed By: MALA On: June 27, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: zeek On: June 26, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic please update soon and make it as good as you can lemon.
don't for get to do the one on fanfiction.net sometime's I can't get on here, but good luck and hurry |
Reviewed By: Jess On: June 26, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! Plz continue soon! =) |
Reviewed By: kasey_sanada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII! Write more!! |
Reviewed By: Jvirgo90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good but i like your other one better TIME APART why did you stop boowooboowoo |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: June 26, 2003 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemon Pie for Everyone~!!~ Kep goin..it's great~ |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: June 26, 2003 10:09 CDT
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WOW this is very orignal story I've never read one with this kind of plot. I think it's gr8! I can't wait 'til you get the lemon up! So up-date SOON!
lol,Yumiki-chan |
Reviewed By: Sorrow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 03:42 CDT
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hehe that was funy her mom chockin him hehe. well if thats it its really good but if you write more i will read it |
Reviewed By: anubis On: July 17, 2003 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
u got to update this fic noiw i must know what happens . UPDATE soon |
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