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Reviewed By: Umi On: July 18, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seemed almost as if you were glossing some details over; a little rushed, but i loved it! =D A fourth ch. would be interesting.....after all, there's still Sango and Miroku to consider, ne? ^^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry! I hit the wrong window -- that last review was for "A Hanyou's Needs" by Crystal Chan. Eheh... It's juvenile but original?
Yeah -- this is still a touching 'fic. I don't think Kagome would be quite that ready to believe Naraku, even as emotionally starved as she's been, but other than that, I'm having a great time. |
Reviewed By: kagome-sama On: July 17, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hin mai name is kagome but mai last name is hikitsu......i really love this story!!!! love it . please wirte more your the best.. im not lying about mai name because some ppl dunt belive me but 2 bad tiz true and im part japanese sop i should know..........WRITE MORE..ask mai friends about mai name 2 |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic. I hope you decide on continuing it, maybe gettin a bit more citrusey??*slaps hand away from keyboard* Sorry that was the hentai side of my mind....ANYWHO...it would be interesting to see your take on how Naraku plans to deal with Kagome...So yeah I'll be waiting, hopefully for more chappies. Ja Ne
~mandi
*oh and if you need/want any ideas email me, I'm always happy to help* ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! keep writeing ^ ^ |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Might have already said this once upon a time, but I like it, and I demand you finish it or all hells about to break loose. Or, you could just let me finish it for you! *frowns* (But, I still can't believe Inuyasha's with Kagome.) NEwayz! Just finish for your fans!!! |
Reviewed By: BakaGaijin On: July 17, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! Please continue with it! You haven't updated in a while! I hope you find time to do so soon! It's such a good story! |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skie On: July 05, 2003 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is gonna be a nar/kag one right? i mean, theres only um... 3 of those out right now! |
Reviewed By: Alexa On: July 02, 2003 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Keep writing but please don't make a Kagome/Naraku fic!
Pleaasee!!!
Keep writing the chapter 3!!!
Bye |
Reviewed By: ari On: July 01, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont noe what style of writing means but o well its a great story. i'm not a huge fan of naraku and kagome bein togethr but as long as inuyasha is feeling the same pain he makes kagome feel than it's ok. it's great! i give it a thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: Loveless On: June 30, 2003 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! You gotta finish this soon! It's so cute! I hope Kagome ends up with Inuyasha, I duun othey just seem so cute. Hmm, Naruku is a bit on the fishy side. GO INU! finish soon! PLZPLZ >,< Can't wait! |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: June 28, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woah...It was so strong...I could actually feel it... You know what I mean... -__- Hopefully. Anywho, I hope it ends up Naraku/Kagome, 'cuz I have Inu/Kag... ^^;; Sorry for all the Inu/Kag fans, no offense, right? Anyways...UPDATE!!!! Because I'll be watching you like a hawk.... o_O |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 28, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is this going to be a inu/keg or a nur/keg ether way ill still read it but i do like a inu/keg fic hurry wiht the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going! This is a great story. |
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