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Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skie On: July 05, 2003 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is gonna be a nar/kag one right? i mean, theres only um... 3 of those out right now! |
Reviewed By: Alexa On: July 02, 2003 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Keep writing but please don't make a Kagome/Naraku fic!
Pleaasee!!!
Keep writing the chapter 3!!!
Bye |
Reviewed By: ari On: July 01, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont noe what style of writing means but o well its a great story. i'm not a huge fan of naraku and kagome bein togethr but as long as inuyasha is feeling the same pain he makes kagome feel than it's ok. it's great! i give it a thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: Loveless On: June 30, 2003 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! You gotta finish this soon! It's so cute! I hope Kagome ends up with Inuyasha, I duun othey just seem so cute. Hmm, Naruku is a bit on the fishy side. GO INU! finish soon! PLZPLZ >,< Can't wait! |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: June 28, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woah...It was so strong...I could actually feel it... You know what I mean... -__- Hopefully. Anywho, I hope it ends up Naraku/Kagome, 'cuz I have Inu/Kag... ^^;; Sorry for all the Inu/Kag fans, no offense, right? Anyways...UPDATE!!!! Because I'll be watching you like a hawk.... o_O |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 28, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is this going to be a inu/keg or a nur/keg ether way ill still read it but i do like a inu/keg fic hurry wiht the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going! This is a great story. |
Reviewed By: witch On: June 27, 2003 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi........OMG this is such a good story....please write more or i will use my witchly powers to punish you --; hehehe got a little carried away there.....but your story is awesome.....??????is it a Kag/Nar or and Kag/Inu???????? i am confused
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well-written and emotionally compelling. I must admit that I hope it doesn't end up being a Naraku/Kagome fic, and instead uses the Naraku/Kagome stuff as a catalyst to kick Inu-Yasha's butt into gear ... but that's just me. I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I started reading this at aff.net, and reviewed the first chapter there, but i'll probably read it here from now on. I like this...I like the way Kagome is niether falling head over heals for Naraku nor pushing him completely away. She's kind of stuck not knowing what she wants. I am against Inuyasha and Kagome being together, because...well...why on earth SHOULD she be 2nd best? And, we all know that if he was put on the spot and had to choose, he'd go for Kikyou :-/ |
Reviewed By: RogueSaiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story so far. I look forward to reading more. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! And it portrays how I felt about Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship. I would have left Inu-chan's ass LONG ago! Well. . .maybe not. But still! The point is, since I've been enjoying this fic a lot, I believe you ought to finish it. I mean, if you didn't, who would you think you ARE!? Anyway, please update ASAP, this is a great and descriptive story! |
Reviewed By: BakaGaijin On: July 19, 2003 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
The tale is continued! Most pleasing to know! Thank you! The last chapter was so sweet! |
Reviewed By: brittany On: July 19, 2003 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was great to read. It was interesting to say the least. I do hope you would continue the story. |
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