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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 24, 2003 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's really good. You caught the more "tender" side of Naraku, but you left it open. No, it's not the end. It need smore. please write more.
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fic. You really should keep writing. |
Reviewed By: BabayBunny On: September 19, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NO! Not 'the end?'!!! You will continue to write untill kagome and inuyasha are happliy mated! with children!! Now update quickly, so i can peer into that wonderful imagination of yours...Pretty please! I'll give you chocholate! |
Reviewed By: RED DAY On: September 18, 2003 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well is it the end??? I see this story on different sites, I wonder if U intend on adding to it??? I wish U would!!! |
Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love this fic! Plz don't stop there! |
Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds On: August 03, 2003 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more! This is really good please don't stop there!
...please... |
Reviewed By: Arashi On: July 26, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. You have a talent, rare as snow in July. Keep up your AWESOME wtiting, I cant wait to see your next fic!!!!! |
Reviewed By: HanyouFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that this storie is going good so far but i think that u should mabye update faster b/c the longer u take the more people go to other stories and dont worry about this one all that much... just wanted to tell u that ... i luv ur storie keep up the good work
U got this Hanyou coming back 4 more |
Reviewed By: Umi On: July 18, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seemed almost as if you were glossing some details over; a little rushed, but i loved it! =D A fourth ch. would be interesting.....after all, there's still Sango and Miroku to consider, ne? ^^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry! I hit the wrong window -- that last review was for "A Hanyou's Needs" by Crystal Chan. Eheh... It's juvenile but original?
Yeah -- this is still a touching 'fic. I don't think Kagome would be quite that ready to believe Naraku, even as emotionally starved as she's been, but other than that, I'm having a great time. |
Reviewed By: kagome-sama On: July 17, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hin mai name is kagome but mai last name is hikitsu......i really love this story!!!! love it . please wirte more your the best.. im not lying about mai name because some ppl dunt belive me but 2 bad tiz true and im part japanese sop i should know..........WRITE MORE..ask mai friends about mai name 2 |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic. I hope you decide on continuing it, maybe gettin a bit more citrusey??*slaps hand away from keyboard* Sorry that was the hentai side of my mind....ANYWHO...it would be interesting to see your take on how Naraku plans to deal with Kagome...So yeah I'll be waiting, hopefully for more chappies. Ja Ne
~mandi
*oh and if you need/want any ideas email me, I'm always happy to help* ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! keep writeing ^ ^ |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Might have already said this once upon a time, but I like it, and I demand you finish it or all hells about to break loose. Or, you could just let me finish it for you! *frowns* (But, I still can't believe Inuyasha's with Kagome.) NEwayz! Just finish for your fans!!! |
Reviewed By: BakaGaijin On: July 17, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! Please continue with it! You haven't updated in a while! I hope you find time to do so soon! It's such a good story! |
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