| "War Story" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Corli On: September 11, 2003 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a little sad that I won't be continuing to read beyond chapter 8. I love the story idea and layout, but I'm getting more than a tad sick of the snide anti-brit remarks. We all fought together in the same war for god's sake, we were allies. You are depicting the British military in a very poor light as tho we were a rag-tag operation in a third-world country. It's a pity, you're bigotry has totally ruined my enjoyment of an otherwise superb story.
Claire |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, it's me again. You have made me quite a devoted fan, ne? ^_^ Just wanted to let you know that I am still very much in love with this fic and am currently chewing through my lip in anticipation of what is to come. You left it at quite a dramatic point, as always. But, I suppose that's part of being a good serial writer- always leave off at a point that has the audience begging for more. ^.~ But, would we audience members really have it any other way? I think not. Hee. Keep up the fantabulous writing, my dear. *huggles and kissies* |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good I can't beleave you havent had more reviews well i'll keep reading so keep udateing your doing great... |
Reviewed By: Aria On: July 06, 2003 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT IN THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???!! HOW COULD YOU STOP IT THERE?! THAT IS PLAIN TORTURE AND I WANT TO MAKE SURE THAT HEERO AND DUO HAVE A HAPPY ENDING. THEY HAD BETTER PLEASE LET THEM BE HAPPY TOGETHER. I WANT TO HAVE THEM BE TOGETHER SINCE DUO IS OBVIOUSLY HURTING RIGHT NOW AND I WANT HEERO TO MAKE IT ALL BETTER. HE NEEDS TOO SINCE HE ACCIDENTALLY HURT THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time i read a chapter or this story I leave with the fealing of wan'ting more ...I am really enjoying this story... Thanks |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know I already left a review, but I just wanted to mention again how much I love this story. The constant updates make me very happy! You're an excelent writer, and your story really comes to life while one reads it! I can't wait for more! Especially since you left it at quite a cliffhanger. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey wow, I like! ^_^ Always been a sucker for a good Flic, lol. I definitely like the language you're using, it flows very nicely and fits well for the time period and all that good stuff. I quite enjoyed every thing so far; hope Heero & Duo get to gether soon! But maybe you're being a little tough on Heero and Duo? ^^ Sorry, it's just they're two of my favorite characters so I get a little picky there, heh heh... Anyways, I shall be checking out the other chapters tomorrow cuz it's gotten surprisingly late surprisingly fast! o.O;; |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
*purs* I just love it! Can't wait until more comes out.
You seem to have put some research behind this, too, it seems. I always enjoy stories like this more when the people actually have some idea of what they're writing about. Well done!! *cheers* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story sweet,well written,A very good and promising start I'd say ; these scenes were well-drawn and interesting to read. I enjoyed reading them. (As to the pairings ; I love 1x2 and 3x4 and I hope to see 5x6 soon... that's in as a well-written story as yours Is. I can really enjoy it because the reading is pleasant,thoughtful, And deep.. Please keep up the great work... |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a really well written fic & I like the plot.
Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: shy_writer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic had me fighting family for the computer. Wow, this was cute. lol! |
