| "No one can have my precious Yuki" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: SHIVVA..or SLAVE =)* On: June 27, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow becky this is what i call HENTAI!!! LOOL I LOVE THE MAsterbating part cause i like to masterbat allot....jpjpjpjpjpjp lolol its really intersting so keep righting MASTER!!! and yuki's still mine bitch so fuck off!! its as cooll fanfic and im taking advantage again of peoples reviews( im gonna make a fanfic tooooo its called( blade, why are you in the.. shade?)lolol bybye from shia the almihghty and since im not smart like you to put japanese words in stories ill just make up a word like bye....shinchoy!!=)* |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....i have to say that mistress niimura you kick ass! that first chappie was great and i want ...no need ..more! me need to know what haru does next and when he will bash tohru's head in because you know if it was up to me she would have already been killed...hahahah (psycotic laughter) any way this story kiks ass and you better update soon...or bakura will hunt you down for me ...after he unties me that is...(gulps) |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
....WEEEE!!! YOURE NEW CHAPPIE ROCKS!^_^ BAKURA AND I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH..DIDNT WE BAKURA???
bakura::....no, i thought it sucked..
mistress:...thats because your mentally unstable.. you dont know what the fuck you're saying...anyway great chappie becky... cant wait till its bashing time(XD)tohru's gonna get killed and haru will slice and dice her-
bakura:: ..speaking of which..(smiles evilly)
mistress: huh?? what the hell are you tal- oh crap!!(relizes the knife in bakura's hand)
bakura::what were you saying before about me being mentally unstable??
mistress: ahhhh!!!(runs away)
bakura:: hahahahahhaha! (chases his mistress)
mistress: (faintly cries) bye beckyyy! |
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