| "No one can have my precious Yuki" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: MaliceKyoDeG ..author On: July 12, 2004 21:09 CDT
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O.O..i thought MM deleted my sotry.. XD well i have the next Chap done XD i guess i can post it once i revise it XD Zeldalday-..>__< sorry i tend to miss words XD i type to fast XD but ty :D +Kyo-chan (Malice Kyo DeG)
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Reviewed By: zeldalady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only problems I found with it were multiple words missing in the middle and several grammar errors throughout. Otherwise it's been enjoyable, and I hope you update soon--I can't wait to see what Haru does when he finally gets his hands on Yuki XD
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Title: Randy Make love to me! please!
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:50 CST
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ohhhhhh becky...... UPDATE!!!!!!! yeah thats righ hoe im talking to you! in fact im looking at you right now!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPdate this thing. ::whispers:: kill tohru...*_* kill her now... make her bleeed*_* HAHAHAHA!!!! what a psycho! i laugh at my evilness!! so anyway bash that biatch's head it (perferably with a bat) and make haru and yuki have hot steamy boy sex^^
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Title: GRRRRR!!!
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 09:10 CST
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oh becky.... ::gives evil glare:: update the fucking story already!!! ::kicks your head:: XD HAHAHAHAHA just playing. but seriously update i know you have no life, your just like me XD beside Baku wants to see some sexy haru-rapes-yugi sex scene!! hahahaha!!! Bakura: no i dont you dumb bitch Mistress: dont be silly, yes you do Bakura: no i dont. only dimwitted whore like you like to read such disgusting peices of literature. your pathetic... you see i actually go out and do those things ::grins:: Mistress: *_*.... ummmmm okay ::laughs nervously:: thats great... ::slowly creeps away:: ::bakura evilly laughs:: Bakura: where the hell are you going?! ::follows with a knife in hand:: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ::mistress screams::
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Haru/Yuki On: November 26, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...I wanna see Haru/Yuki stuff though! Please update soon!
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Title: T________T;;;;
Reviewed By: Malice Kyo DeG [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 21:53 CST
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^_____^ Thankies everyone ::gives out candy:: umm sorry about the chapter mix up ::sigh:: MM is not being nice to me..but keep putting reviews so i can keep on writing ^___^ chap 5 coming up SOON~~!!! ::runs off::
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:17 CDT
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Wow, she is a slut.....anyway, update soon! What's gonna happen when Haru gets Yuki? |
Reviewed By: Panic_Relic On: July 01, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was funny and sad at the same time. the only thing i didnt like was the fact the all the word were stuck together. i suggest that evertime someone talks, u shouldmake a new paragraph and indent or double space it. so follow my advice and i wanna read the next one. |
Reviewed By: the ALMIGHTY SHIVAA COMES ONES AGAIN!! On: July 01, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I MEAN.. WOW.. ITS BETTER THAN THE FIRST.haha thats mean to say but true... ok sooo...what did you get me i wanna no!!! i hope its a 12 inch vibrator i can stick up my ass!!!!! or even better..BLADE!!- (WARNING- I FINISHED MY BLADE FANFIC SO IF YOU WANNA READ IT.. YOU CANT1! CAUSE IM NOT POSTING IT UNTILL SOMBODY RUBBS POO ON MY NIPPLES) OK I LOVE YOUR |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! you updated! ^_^ Update again soon! |
Reviewed By: eye half ei big pinas On: June 30, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha it sucks jpjpjpjpjp i love it it really kicks ass and i cant wait to read more chapies s hurry up stop wasting time in ash's house and write god damn it or else "YOU GO TO HELL U GO TO HELL AND U DIE ISN'T THAT RIGHT MR. HAT YEAH FUCK MR.HAT NO KYLE FUCK U" HAHA |
Reviewed By: eye half ei big pinas On: June 30, 2003 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha it sucks jpjpjpjpjp i love it it really kicks ass and i cant wait to read more chapies s hurry up stop wasting time in ash's house and write god damn it or else "YOU GO TO HELL U GO TO HELL AND U DIE ISN'T THAT RIGHT MR. HAT YEAH FUCK MR.HAT NO KYLE FUCK U" HAHA |
Reviewed By: PANIC_RELIC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great sarah( i cant call u by ur real name or else people will touch u ) i really like the story and its was really funny. OHHH YUKI...OHHH YUKI/OHHH MY GOD WHAT ARE U DOING. that was great and i cant wait to see what he does to tohru honda...its gonna be crazy. have u noticed people we dont know write soooo little |
Reviewed By: eye half ei big pinas On: June 29, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cool write more go d damn it |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sounds kool so far!! Update soon! |
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