| "No one can have my precious Yuki" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: GRRRRR!!!
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 09:10 CST
Comment/Review:
oh becky.... ::gives evil glare:: update the fucking story already!!! ::kicks your head:: XD HAHAHAHAHA just playing. but seriously update i know you have no life, your just like me XD beside Baku wants to see some sexy haru-rapes-yugi sex scene!! hahahaha!!! Bakura: no i dont you dumb bitch Mistress: dont be silly, yes you do Bakura: no i dont. only dimwitted whore like you like to read such disgusting peices of literature. your pathetic... you see i actually go out and do those things ::grins:: Mistress: *_*.... ummmmm okay ::laughs nervously:: thats great... ::slowly creeps away:: ::bakura evilly laughs:: Bakura: where the hell are you going?! ::follows with a knife in hand:: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ::mistress screams::
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Haru/Yuki On: November 26, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...I wanna see Haru/Yuki stuff though! Please update soon!
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Title: T________T;;;;
Reviewed By: Malice Kyo DeG [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 21:53 CST
Comment/Review:
^_____^ Thankies everyone ::gives out candy:: umm sorry about the chapter mix up ::sigh:: MM is not being nice to me..but keep putting reviews so i can keep on writing ^___^ chap 5 coming up SOON~~!!! ::runs off::
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, she is a slut.....anyway, update soon! What's gonna happen when Haru gets Yuki? |
Reviewed By: Panic_Relic On: July 01, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was funny and sad at the same time. the only thing i didnt like was the fact the all the word were stuck together. i suggest that evertime someone talks, u shouldmake a new paragraph and indent or double space it. so follow my advice and i wanna read the next one. |
Reviewed By: the ALMIGHTY SHIVAA COMES ONES AGAIN!! On: July 01, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I MEAN.. WOW.. ITS BETTER THAN THE FIRST.haha thats mean to say but true... ok sooo...what did you get me i wanna no!!! i hope its a 12 inch vibrator i can stick up my ass!!!!! or even better..BLADE!!- (WARNING- I FINISHED MY BLADE FANFIC SO IF YOU WANNA READ IT.. YOU CANT1! CAUSE IM NOT POSTING IT UNTILL SOMBODY RUBBS POO ON MY NIPPLES) OK I LOVE YOUR |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! you updated! ^_^ Update again soon! |
Reviewed By: eye half ei big pinas On: June 30, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha it sucks jpjpjpjpjp i love it it really kicks ass and i cant wait to read more chapies s hurry up stop wasting time in ash's house and write god damn it or else "YOU GO TO HELL U GO TO HELL AND U DIE ISN'T THAT RIGHT MR. HAT YEAH FUCK MR.HAT NO KYLE FUCK U" HAHA |
Reviewed By: eye half ei big pinas On: June 30, 2003 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha it sucks jpjpjpjpjp i love it it really kicks ass and i cant wait to read more chapies s hurry up stop wasting time in ash's house and write god damn it or else "YOU GO TO HELL U GO TO HELL AND U DIE ISN'T THAT RIGHT MR. HAT YEAH FUCK MR.HAT NO KYLE FUCK U" HAHA |
Reviewed By: PANIC_RELIC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great sarah( i cant call u by ur real name or else people will touch u ) i really like the story and its was really funny. OHHH YUKI...OHHH YUKI/OHHH MY GOD WHAT ARE U DOING. that was great and i cant wait to see what he does to tohru honda...its gonna be crazy. have u noticed people we dont know write soooo little |
Reviewed By: eye half ei big pinas On: June 29, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cool write more go d damn it |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sounds kool so far!! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: SHIVVA..or SLAVE =)* On: June 27, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow becky this is what i call HENTAI!!! LOOL I LOVE THE MAsterbating part cause i like to masterbat allot....jpjpjpjpjpjp lolol its really intersting so keep righting MASTER!!! and yuki's still mine bitch so fuck off!! its as cooll fanfic and im taking advantage again of peoples reviews( im gonna make a fanfic tooooo its called( blade, why are you in the.. shade?)lolol bybye from shia the almihghty and since im not smart like you to put japanese words in stories ill just make up a word like bye....shinchoy!!=)* |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....i have to say that mistress niimura you kick ass! that first chappie was great and i want ...no need ..more! me need to know what haru does next and when he will bash tohru's head in because you know if it was up to me she would have already been killed...hahahah (psycotic laughter) any way this story kiks ass and you better update soon...or bakura will hunt you down for me ...after he unties me that is...(gulps) |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
....WEEEE!!! YOURE NEW CHAPPIE ROCKS!^_^ BAKURA AND I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH..DIDNT WE BAKURA???
bakura::....no, i thought it sucked..
mistress:...thats because your mentally unstable.. you dont know what the fuck you're saying...anyway great chappie becky... cant wait till its bashing time(XD)tohru's gonna get killed and haru will slice and dice her-
bakura:: ..speaking of which..(smiles evilly)
mistress: huh?? what the hell are you tal- oh crap!!(relizes the knife in bakura's hand)
bakura::what were you saying before about me being mentally unstable??
mistress: ahhhh!!!(runs away)
bakura:: hahahahahhaha! (chases his mistress)
mistress: (faintly cries) bye beckyyy! |
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