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Title: Craved and Forbidden
Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: January 22, 2004 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has been quite awhile since your last update. I would be very happy if a new chapter came out. And I don't think I'm the only one. Please write a new chapter soon and I will review again. -xxx-Dutchfangirl
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Reviewed By: Trevin On: December 16, 2003 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When's the next part coming out? I can't wait to read more!
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Title: craved and forbidden
Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: October 26, 2003 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to write more??? I can't wait to read the next chapter, chapter 10 so I hope you'll update as soon as you can. Luv Dutchfangirl
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Title: just checking
Reviewed By: me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, just checking summt, ignore this, i'm not some saddo writing myself a review
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Title: Craved and Forbidden
Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: October 07, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trunks escaped from jail. Oopsie.... But I think I like that idea. I certainly hope Gohan wil get his memory back soon. Hope you'll update soon! Luv Dutchfangirl
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Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: October 05, 2003 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i gave you a glowing review for your chapter 8....i like what your doing but i dont like the sex gohan has with the other guy.....please straighten everything out for trunks i dont like that he keeps getting into more and more trouble.....get gohans memory back too please.....i dont know, this is just a suggestion but have trunks find gohan.....they see each other....(big fight with mafia).... gohan remembers everything....... bulma gets trunks off the hook by paying off a crooked cop.....HEY ITS JUST A SUGGESTION!!!!! BUT NO MORE TROUBLE PLEASE!!!!!! MUCH LOVE, saiyanprincess88
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege*me again!!!* On: September 29, 2003 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gah.. sorry to double review, but the other one didnt post one last thing.. Please update again soon!!! And if that didnt show up again, it says "Please update again soon!!!" ^_^
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *yes its me!* On: September 29, 2003 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe!!! ^_^ Thanks for the little mention... Im glad you liked my reviews!! WOOHOO! Aww... that was soo evil!!!! But unexpected!! This is what I think should happen, but I know most likely wont! I think that Gohan should blast away from the blonde kid, then Trunks will find him.. and they can run away together...Aww.. Coz poor Trunks will only have to go to jail... Damn I hate that bitch character!! Grr!! I want to slap her face!!!!!! The one that told all those nastly lies to the cops...
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Title: Craved and forbidden
Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: September 28, 2003 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Great story. I need to read a lot more. Please update again soon. I feel sorry for Trunks...Keep this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fireice [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love eminem!!!!
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Reviewed By: I luv Vege *it wont let me log in* On: September 16, 2003 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
SUSPENCE!! That was a nasty cliffy you left it at.. not very nice at all!!!!!
I NEED to read more, ok?? Please update sooner this time.. screw all those essays! =p Haha! ANyhoo, GREAT as always..! I luv this ficcy!! WOO HOOOOO!!! |
Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: September 15, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!! fantastic!!! my gosh your good....please update soon i really must know what happens to trunks, but he's not a rapest!!! make him innocent.......Gohan cant be hurt please!!! and bra make her safe to....i realli would like to see trunks and gohan together....i read it on sept,14. 03......and i cant stop thinking about how the plot will turn out.....MORE PLEASE!!
Much love,
saiyanprincess88 |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 06:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I NEED MORE!!
OMG... I luv it!! WOO HOO!! This is sooooooooo great!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
PLEASE update soon!! ^_^_^^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^^_^_^^ |
Reviewed By: leelee On: August 22, 2003 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry it took me so long to drag my sorry little ass over here...^^;;;
*grins* I love Yaoiya to pices, I do. ^-^ "Sorry but that's funny. Didn't you see it coming?" *snickers* Funny stuff he says. Anyway, about the chapter. Great! I love this stuff! You gotta keep it coming! Hurry up and update, since you let them kiss but do nothing more...*evil glare* ^__^;; |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 24, 2003 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know your a 10 in my book, right?! Awesome chapie and I was extremely happy to see it so soon! ^_^ Yup, I agree, definately Gohan. He's got more experience and *ahem* 'staying power'. *hentai grin* I think Trunks at this point would be too shy and new to take the initiative & We can't have it all over too quickly, now can we? Gohan needs to enjoy himself too! lol Gohan seme for sure. Besides, I think Gohan's incredibly sexy when he's on top and takes control. *drool* |
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