| "Craved and Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Craved and forbidden
Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: September 28, 2003 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Great story. I need to read a lot more. Please update again soon. I feel sorry for Trunks...Keep this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fireice [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love eminem!!!!
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Reviewed By: I luv Vege *it wont let me log in* On: September 16, 2003 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
SUSPENCE!! That was a nasty cliffy you left it at.. not very nice at all!!!!!
I NEED to read more, ok?? Please update sooner this time.. screw all those essays! =p Haha! ANyhoo, GREAT as always..! I luv this ficcy!! WOO HOOOOO!!! |
Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: September 15, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!! fantastic!!! my gosh your good....please update soon i really must know what happens to trunks, but he's not a rapest!!! make him innocent.......Gohan cant be hurt please!!! and bra make her safe to....i realli would like to see trunks and gohan together....i read it on sept,14. 03......and i cant stop thinking about how the plot will turn out.....MORE PLEASE!!
Much love,
saiyanprincess88 |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 06:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I NEED MORE!!
OMG... I luv it!! WOO HOO!! This is sooooooooo great!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
PLEASE update soon!! ^_^_^^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^^_^_^^ |
Reviewed By: leelee On: August 22, 2003 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry it took me so long to drag my sorry little ass over here...^^;;;
*grins* I love Yaoiya to pices, I do. ^-^ "Sorry but that's funny. Didn't you see it coming?" *snickers* Funny stuff he says. Anyway, about the chapter. Great! I love this stuff! You gotta keep it coming! Hurry up and update, since you let them kiss but do nothing more...*evil glare* ^__^;; |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 24, 2003 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know your a 10 in my book, right?! Awesome chapie and I was extremely happy to see it so soon! ^_^ Yup, I agree, definately Gohan. He's got more experience and *ahem* 'staying power'. *hentai grin* I think Trunks at this point would be too shy and new to take the initiative & We can't have it all over too quickly, now can we? Gohan needs to enjoy himself too! lol Gohan seme for sure. Besides, I think Gohan's incredibly sexy when he's on top and takes control. *drool* |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 21, 2003 18:20 CDT
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*looks up at blahhh's comment* Damn good point. Trunks would loose it too fast. Forgot he was even a virgin. Lol, and that was one of the slightly important elements of the fic. ^^;;; Can I change my vote? lol. |
Reviewed By: blahhh On: July 21, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gohan should definetly be on top. I mean c'mon Trunks is a virgin, if he was on top he'd loose it to quick. *blinks* What? It's true!!! Stop looking at me like that! I'm not a pervert! ...ok Well maybe I am. ^_^
This is a great story keep it up! |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 21, 2003 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
All right, I finally found it~!!!!!!!!!!!!
Though, *pouts* my poor Tunkies... But hats off to when Gohan told off that Lowela chick. *sticks out tongue at Lowela* And I completely agree with you about Videl! She is definitely being a bitch in this fic! I can't believe how awfully she's treating Gohan...*hugs Go-chan* It's okay, sweetie, Trunks can make everything all better...
Hmm...who should be on top? Well, I can't really decide. Either of them would be just as good... *ponders* Well, after some careful consideration (ok, after a quick game of eenie meenie miney mo ^^;;) I vote for Trunks to be on top. *grins* But I'll be happy both ways. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 16, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? Your the best! I'm so glad you update often. I get so excited when new chapies come out! ^_^ *sighs* I know, I'm hopeless. I can't help it though. I love my Saiyans and when a talented author like you can make them so real for me, well... I can't stay away. Whoohoo! Even Trunks likes the idea of sex with Gohan on the desk. *hentai laugh* We are all such perverts! lol STILL LOVIN' IT! |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 11, 2003 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! Poor Trunks, he must be so confused right now *not to worry Trunks, Gohan wants you too* Who could blame him for wanting Gohan though, I mean really, he's just soo friggin' HOT! This is Not like alot of others, this is pretty original and very well done. I love it! Hey, I'm all over the sex on Gohans desk thing, that would be just so damned sexy... Hmm,oh yeah *is drooling all over Gohan again*
(I just knew you were Brittish) ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 11, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I like it! Please keep going! Yes I definately agree, Eminem IS hot! So is Gohan! I must say, you have awesome taste in men! ^_^ I like the way you write, I'm kinda wondering if you are Brittish, the words you use make me think you are. My husband is Brittish so I'm just curious. Anyway, good job! |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 09, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much like this fic!!! *nods* And no, it's not the same as every other Gohan and Trunks get together fic. Well, not to me anyways. But I like to think that I've read enough Truhan to know...so...^^;;; Anyway, I like how you put Gohan's surprise at Trunks looking like, well, Trunks in there. Very nice. Kinda hints that (if he was actually also checking Trunks out, instead of just being surprised) Gohan has a bit of a crush on Mirai Trunks. ^-^ Which would definitely encourage him into liking Trunks. ^_~ Now, I certainly hope that when Trunks and Gohan actually do figure out how much they're attracted to each other, that they'll screw like bunnies on Gohan's desk!!! *hentai laughter* ^___^ Update! Update! Update!!! ^-^
**leelee
PS: Ya gotta love Yaoiya. 'Specially the name. Lol. Very creative. ^^ |
Reviewed By: bakajack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I for one am reading and enjoying and am looking forward to the next part! So *thumbs up* from me! |
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