"A Demonic Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: always [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 15:07 CDT Comment/Review: I was just wondering why you would u[date at certain intervals? I understand to a degree, but at the same time, what about the rest of us that really, really, really, want to know how the story ends? Or are we allowed to review more than once and have them all counted? Just curious. Anyway, I like the story and your writting style. So please continue the story. THANX!! :cheesy grin:
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Title: Great story Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 18:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story! Update soon. Would like to know if Kagome stays haf-demon or not.
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Reviewed By: nightscream On: August 02, 2003 23:57 CDT Comment/Review: ummm i think you accidently posted ch 2 twice once as ch 1 & again as ch 2. just thought you might want to know.
other than that it is a good fic. |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 13:23 CDT Comment/Review: heh... kagome an inu hanyou... amusing, i like the story so far. update soon! |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 23:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: uh oh.... i personally think naraku went off the deep end for being so stupid this time... his ass is dead... eh well not like inuyasha wasnt gonna kill him before.. but eh this dont help.. ooo violet eyes? id luv that.... i have to settle for contacts... well hurry up n update! |
Reviewed By: Violet Rose On: July 30, 2003 16:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: aah! post asap! We must know what happens! I like the story so far. Poor Kagome.. eww disgusting thoughts of Naraku... heh Inuyasha will kick his ass... Hurry and post damnit! |
Reviewed By: Guns On: July 13, 2003 03:00 CDT Comment/Review: Not bad. Really intesting. You and this story have great potectial please contine writing.
"Nothing to live for but love. Nothing to die for but protection. But for me, I live and die for nothing" ~~~GUNS~~~ |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 15:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please hurry up and update. It's not fair to leave us hanging like this! do you KNOW how difficult it is to find a well written, grammatically correct fic that is also INTERESTING? And I do NOT agree with extortion. Some folk are unable to express themselves, and should not be penalized for it. 'K? |
Reviewed By: Kotoriko On: July 30, 2003 09:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: thats pretty good, is this going to be likea Naraku Kagome Thing? I personally Am Twisted Like That So It would be a great read for me. i love sesshoumaru/kagome and naraku/kagome pairings PLEASE continue!!!!! |