| "On Vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: on vacation
Reviewed By: Inuyasha135_71@Hotmail.com On: January 23, 2005 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that wuz very good i cant wait till the next few chapters come out! :]
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Reviewed By: May_girl On: July 04, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always love a story that shows them in a different light. I can't wait to see how they come together. Most enjoyable!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Cara Goth Bear On: May 07, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like Black Kitty said I love this story. She is evil and don't pay her any heed but I will be turning 17 on May 20 and an update would be nice. I love how Inuyasha helped Kagome with the dishes and how they fell asleep on each other that really tickled my love bone as I like to call me romantic side. The other thing that really made me laugh was how he was jealous of the puppy that really described my way of thinking about Inuyasha. And also if you get a review from any one called Ballet Child, Nice Thang, or Aura Bella they're a part of my group of talent finding people listen to them.
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: Black Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley llllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee your stories they're the best especially this one. I see you haven't updated this one in a while and that really makes me sad. Anyway I actually got my friend who barely ever finds good stories that she likes, (she is a hard critic on stories and this one she really liked.) Her b-day is on May 20 and I was hoping for it you could update this one. I am hoping that before June 11th it will have a new chapter since that would be a good present for me. Hopefully Erin.
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: lindy*girl On: September 28, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! Too cool! I'm totally loving this! All your stories are really cool! =^.^=byebye!
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 08, 2003 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmho, I can't stop laughing! That whole puppy thing was too much. Anyway, as I have said in other reviews to your other stories, I am thoroughly enjoying reading your fics. You have a huge share of talent there! Please update this and your other stories soon. Best wishes! |
Reviewed By: wow... On: July 27, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it! it was so koi to see inuyasha get all jealous of a puppy! keep updating so i can read the rest, it's really good! |
Reviewed By: nekobaka On: July 01, 2003 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thats so cute how they feel aslep on each other!
keep wrighting this its good - and I want to know what grandpa's up to... |
