| "Why did you leave me?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 19, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good story. you're a pretty good writer.and all the drama in the story...WOW. i hope you finished that sequel, i wanna see whats happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: unkhato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Reviewed By: unkhato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kind of thought that you should have ended the story after they got married because it got boring after a while. I liked the story but I really thought that Gohan was out of character. I liked the couplings.
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was really good, but to bad you made Gohan into a little slut! But otherwise I really liked your story! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Aimee On: July 23, 2003 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more this story is getting really good and i cant wait for you to write more ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Animechick On: July 18, 2003 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really liked this story! I'm not a big fan of such a stoned Gohan but other than that, it was good. Please keep going. can't wait to see what happens |
Reviewed By: Sophs On: July 08, 2003 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i said it once and i'll say it again...please write more things |
Reviewed By: sophs On: July 02, 2003 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more chapters i love this story ^_^ |
