| "My love for you is forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird but interesting!!! Update faster!!
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Reviewed By: Sophs On: August 17, 2003 09:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow never expected that |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: August 09, 2003 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that does seem more like a gohan and marron. well update soon so we can find out who it is. i guess my last guess was wrong it seems to be.oh well again please update |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW WHO THE MISTORY CUPLE IS.
At first I thought that is was going to be Vegeta and Pan before I read it but during the entire first and second chapters they kept expressing their love verbally. That is something that Vegeta would never do. The only way that that would be possible in the story would be if my Veggi were way OOC.
Then I considered Bra and Gohan as the mystery couple. That didn't work out either because in the second chapter the mystery girl's boyfriend thought that she was having an affair with Trunks and unless incest is in that guys head: it cannot be Bra.
So I have come to the conclusion that it is Gohan and Marron, that Marron's boyfriend was Goten, and that Gohan's wife was of curse Videl!
Was I right? |
Reviewed By: Sophie On: August 09, 2003 07:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
i know who it isnow.it is Pan and vegeta. or maybey not...hmmm I NEED TO KNOW *goes crazy* |
Reviewed By: sophs On: July 09, 2003 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to you write more chapters. it is either Pan and vegeta. Goku And Bra, Goten married to Bra but going with MArron who is going out with trunks at the time. thats all my guesses |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: June 30, 2003 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that cha was short and i think i know the two people who are having a affair is it goku and bulma. if im wrong then that is ok i was taking a guess and some info kinda points those two people out. |
