| "Blue Bamboo" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: redbirdo27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 19:13 CDT
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that was really great, but there's only one thing I would change. USE COMMAS! It took me a while to figure out where the pauses should be (because yes, I am stupid and oblivious) So I think it would be easier to understand if you added commas.
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Reviewed By: marron1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 23:37 CST
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Reviewed By: marron1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Thank you very Much
Reviewed By: marron1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for writing one on about one of my VERY favorite couples.
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Reviewed By: The Last Samurai On: November 25, 2004 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
By all means dude plz write more, especially lemons with Aoshi, he does need to get laid more often. :D bless
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Title: Liked it
Reviewed By: Tenshi Shi Rachiru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 16:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Great for a late night read. Nice to have one with Aoshi in for once. Look forward to the next one. (Will it be a continuation or one off?) The only thing you might need to tweak are som basic sp/pnct errors.
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Reviewed By: Fuu-chan On: June 22, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Your story reminded me of a session of rp that happened quite some time ago. This was cute, I hope you write more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Annibella Turner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! That was your first lemon?!?O_O D*** your good...
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Reviewed By: Zerianyu This is my name on mm.org On: September 20, 2003 05:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked it I hope you write more |
