| "The Adventures of Tristasusen" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Make love to me Randy!! Please!
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHHA!!!! XD Beto that was hilarious, yes i know it took me forever to read it but at least i did right? you know it! oh yea... update you son of a biatch, you cant just leave a fic at a horrible cliffe like that....bastard jp jp^^ oh and you forgot allot of "s" at the end of your words... just to let you know ::winks:: see ya! i have a sexy white-haired bishie to get spanked by! ^_~ ::skips away::
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Reviewed By: AlMiGHtY SHIVAA!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont know you.. but i like your story. its funny. id like to hear more and be your friend im just scared when you find out who this is lolol i hope my name doesnt pop up anywhere.. so tristasusen.. you sound like a cool sumarai! really..funny stuff you got here.. i didnt know you could right soo good i mean seriously i thought you were stupid!! ahahahahaahah(not true) |
Reviewed By: AlMiGHtY SHIVAA!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIBBY!! I MEAN REALLY. YOUR STORY IS HILARIOUS AND ORIGINAL . IT LOOKS LIKE YOUVE BEEN RIGHTING FANFICS FOR YEEAARS LOL.WOW DONT STOP NOW I LOVE YOUR CONFUSING PARTS AND THE KIKASS ACTION( IF ANY)HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THAT NAME I MEAN REAALLY? CAN TWit for the next chapter so hurry up and how could your charactere be a regular girl by day then superhero DAY AND NIGHT? AHHAHAHAHAH |
Reviewed By: Malice Kyo DeG [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
kick ass its really good..u better write some more!TRISTASUSEN!has come to life!!!! yayayayay! (>'.')> |
Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeek... I hate cliffhangers. lol.
A few little mistakes, nothing major. A few of the sentences were composed a little strangely, but overall its going great |
Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... it's a little bit confusing as of yet, but i'm anxious to see where it's going. I'll be checking in. |
