| "Beautiful Force" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Please keep going! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Man that was cruel just stopping like that.*shakes fist at author* I should beat you up. Just continue please.
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Title: too short
Reviewed By: MeiLing LI On: January 18, 2004 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Well it looks good so far...even though I would have never have guessed that WuFei would be the one pinning over Duo. But the chaptersare so dang short...why! But I love it, even if I have never been a fan of 2x5 it's still an interesting plot...keep up the good work and all that Jazz. ;) Oh I was going to mention also the problem with such short chapters and a long wait in between is that the reader forget where they are and you loses the flow of the fic...not that you really care but still. good luck!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 25, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Wufei. I hope is the lonelyness that is bugging him and nothing more. I hate fics that leave him with unrequited love for Duo or Heero. I hope this fic has a happy ending for all the characters. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 24, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really cute. Keep up the *good* job. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 20, 2003 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really short...But I still like it. Keep up the *good* job. |
Reviewed By: Yuffie On: August 10, 2003 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, weee! 1x2 are the best pairing ever, love it!!! I honestly CANNOT wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 03, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Dou... Mean, Quatre, Mean Quatre... Anyhow Dou gets a good reception from Heero. Keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: tarigarma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUEĦĦĦĦĦĦĦĦĦ |
Reviewed By: Devil On: August 01, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have all my interest in your fic. Congratulations. |
Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I liked your fic... I like your Heero and Duo style... I have to say that I prefer Quatre being cuter and less angry, but he's doing a nice job taking care of others bussiness ^^
But what the hell happened before Heero's mission? And, are Wufei... worried about Duo liking Heero? Wasn't Quatre going to talk with Duo about his feelings? Ohhh, so many questions, so few chapters ^^
I'm sorry if I got it wrong but... In the second chapter, Quatre was sitting at Trowa's lap, while they were talking to Wufei... and then Trowa gets up from a couch to go to Quatre at other one... I got confused with that part, maybe it was a little technical mistake? Or my terrible reading I guess ^^
Well, keep up the good work... I like your story, very much ^^ You asked what we, readers, wanted to see on it? Well, I wanna see lots of 1x2, Heero being himself (no OOC with him, pleaseeeee? Heero being fluffy makes me... sick o.O), and a good 3x4 background, onegai? Don't forget about them ^^ |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 17, 2003 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read and find out what will happen next. Keep up the good job and update soon. |
Reviewed By: Sapphire On: June 30, 2003 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Gundam Wing!!! |
Reviewed By: Cat On: June 30, 2003 08:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great. I love it when Duo has to take care of Heero. Poor Heero. Please continue soon. Thanx. |
