| "Demon Ring" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiyame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sniff.... It's so sad! I love the new look on Ryu though. It's really cool, and certainly not something I see very often! Poor Tatsuya!! I LOVE Tatsuya, and it's sad for him to, well.... be so sad. But still, I have faith that you'll pull them out of this rut somehow! For fangirls everywhere!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Doodle_Penguin On: November 01, 2004 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! UPATE!!! You have to UPDATE!!! SOON!!! I love this story but you have'nt updated in like forever!! so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Escagirl On: October 18, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You gotta write more! It's so sad... I hope things work out for them in the end.
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Reviewed By: djbrown On: October 14, 2004 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a fun story! A demon Ruichi...who woulda thought it? Story captures the imagination...makes you wanna keep reading! Very good! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Chibi_baka On: October 14, 2004 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still reading! *waves hand* But.. all this angst... It will have to stop! ;.; So saad! Otherwise, good reactions overall. It felt as if it wasn't just shaken off, by either off them, as you can see in some fics. Good work. ^^
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Reviewed By: redrose On: October 09, 2004 18:36 CDT
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oh god, how sad. they shouldn't deny that they actually like each other and that was not "rape" more like educational sex ^-~ course people's still reading, they just don't always want to review ^^;;. update more, please?
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Reviewed By: RedRose On: August 11, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O ooooo, please write more! I love your fic. Tatsu/Ryuu is my faaaaaaaaaavorite coupling. You don't have a writer's block, do you? Anyway, I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Chibi Baka On: June 15, 2004 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't bad! >o< Far from it! Tis good! Very, very good! Poor Tatsuha.. being tortured like that... but the pretty lime.. XD;;; Yes, yes, going forward is good, and I see forward to more chapters and more of the story! Please? Pretty please? I SO want more of this! It isn't often you see a serious fic instead of the humor ones.. which can be fun, but not as engaging as a serious one. You HAVE to continue!
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Reviewed By: This is Meandering On: May 30, 2004 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh! I'm SO glad you updated. Great work, but I feel so sorry for Tatsuha.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Baka On: May 22, 2004 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh.. more! ^_^ I was so happy when there was a new chapter! I love this fic, so well written. I like Ryuuichi's inner angsting... not that I particularily *like* angst, but it was well done.. showed the conflict and all that... and finally closer to some real shounen-ai! Yay! Pleaase continue, and soon! LOve it all!
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 02:43 CDT
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You bloody better write more, or Demon Peony is going to tear you slo-o-o-o-owly apart!
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Reviewed By: Chibi_baka On: May 17, 2004 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really happy you wrote another chapter! This is my fave pairing, but it's freaking hard to find! >.< .. excuse the outburst. ^^; Well.. I like the way you write, and how you did Ryuuichi. I just hope they'll get together soon. And I like the reaction in Tohma's office when Mika came in. ^^ Great work!
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Reviewed By: shadow On: July 23, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the parts you have posted so far and am looking forward to how the story is going to develope. Ryuichi as a demon is a very interesting idea, but he's so enigmatic and intense in the show and the manga that it is a very appealing idea. As a huge Ryuichi fan, it's always nice to see more well-written and interesting stories about him online. I hope you post the next part of the story soon, I'm eagerly awaiting how Ryuichi and Tatsuha will get through the conflict and actually become a couple. |
Reviewed By: Linzy-chan On: July 03, 2003 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought you put alot of effort into this and i liked it alot.... i can't wait for the lemony goodness though^_^ please update soon!! |
