Reviewed By: Jade Angel On: September 05, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
..The last line of this fic...made it incredibly good. I cracked up laughing..and I was really glad my roommate wasn't in the room, because this would be kinda hard to explain to her ;) Anyway..I caught a few small grammatical errors, nothing too serious; most people wouldn't catch them...and the originality was....great. *grins* You're good. |
