| "What's in the Backpack" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: SL2 On: May 22, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Tears well up in her ears and she whispers, "How I wish things were different, that the well did not work." lol
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Title: how do you do it?
Reviewed By: The Divine Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is great as well, all of your fics that I've read I've liked. All the other "Kagome's Bag" fics I've read seem not as good now. You have a big imagination I'm sure, I'll look forward to reading your other works. -TDD ^(0.0~)^
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Title: I like this fic
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very interesting and I agree with Duo no Tsuin that you need a sequel with Inu, Sesshoumaru, Miroku, or Sango finding some of that stuff.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *never seems to log in anymore* On: January 08, 2004 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*lol* The hentai magazine and the picture of Kagome and Hojo were suprising additions. If you think HER bag is bad... you should never go camping with me for 2 days... Duct tape rules! ^_~ *snickers* You need a story about Inu, Sesshoumaru, Miroku, or Sango finding that. Heck, ALL of them should! ;)
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: November 16, 2003 10:00 CST
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HOLY SHIT! How does she carry all that stuff? Well...she actually uses up most of it, and sometimes Inu or Miroku carry it for her, or she straps it to her bike (which Inu usually ends up carrying anyway!). Anyway, this was a great story, it's brilliant that you thought of all this stuff! Except about that pic of Kagome and Hojo, doncha think Inu might get a li'l jealous too? And since he KNOWS Hojo's from the future, he might try to go there and 'defeat' him, when no one's around? Okay, I'll stop blabbering, peace out!
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Reviewed By: yasha On: October 05, 2003 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
aw u just cant live without duck tape it fixes everything like cuts,if somthing gets broke, inuyashas mouth, ripped cloths, mirokus mouth, and u just cant forget KOGAS MOUTH! lol well i would like if u continued the story like what happens when she takes all the stuff down the well you could get a good 2-3chappies on that well i will review again!
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gawd, you think of things no one else would even consider. I was tinkin'(cute word) you do a lot of stuff involving Kagome's mom. Is she your favorite character?
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Reviewed By: c_vega On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered this story and I love it. It was so amusing and you explain why she brings what she does so very well. But how on earth does the girl carry all that? That is just impressive. :-) Before I forget, it is very refreshing to read an author who has such good grammer and fine writing skills. I'm impressed. I look forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Tom On: August 11, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stangly enough this Needs a Sequel |
Reviewed By: chi On: July 15, 2003 22:12 CDT
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whats the duck tape for . i liked the fic a lot . very orginal. |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your use of language is very good. You are staying in character, and the readability is so high I forgot I was reading - more like watching it in my head. (Speed Reader) Bless you for knowing the rules of grammar! I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
