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Title: hmm never rated anything b4...^_^;;
Reviewed By: Rebecca/Taka On: March 18, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well what can I say? I LOVED IT!!! I read them for 3 days in my free time, really glad you updated this year too. I felt the stupidity of Goku was very original, and nontheless creative to say the least, so I gave you a perfect 10. Well duh, I thouroughly enjoyed it, otherwise I would not have read it ALL and for that you got another perfect 10. Spelling and grammer was great, not perfect, but that doesn't matter as much as the laughs I got out of it. Your style is completely your own, but isn't perfect, but it is very close. And overall I absolutely loved it! PERFECTICIMO! er something like that. Pwitty pwease make another :'( Pweeeeease! Ok hope you read this, and really...where are Bulma's parents ALL THE TIME? And on that note I'm saying ttyl (ta ta ya loser) lol jk ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I laughed so hard I had to change my underwear like, five times before I got done. You have a gift, and it's not fair to keep that gift from the world. (Did you ever think that the reason Veg is always made at Goku is because they're lovers and Goku won't swallow cum? Odd, I know. But just a random thought.)
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very funny! Though I was wondering, what if Trunks asked Goku a bunch of questions about his feelings towards him, and every answer Goku gives him indicates he feels the same way? Anyway, I really liked what you wrote.
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: I luv Kai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 06:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best humor fic I've read in this category! I laughed so much my sides felt like they were spliting!!! LOL! I luved it! Are you gonna keep going? Please do cos this brought sunshine into my otherwise dark and cloudy day! P.S Trunks is sooooooooo gay! I mean what straight guy has purple hair and doesn't dye it a different color? I'm not homophobic I'm really the opposite cos I like yaoi and slash, but Trunks just IS gay!
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Reviewed By: inny INdira On: November 24, 2003 11:18 CST
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I SOOOOOOOOOOOO ADORE YOU! your are 8712598567 times better dan me...ya know...but! I've got some excuse! I'm dutch ^_^ hehehehe anyway, if you like to read on of my veeerrrryyyy weird/crappy stories...go to ff.net and search for the author little inny heheheheheh...well...I can't think of anything to say anymore....hmmmm well anyway...you're the greatest.
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 10:42 CST
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This is great. One thing that might be interesting would be combining Goku, Vegeta and the song "Anything You Can Do, I Can Do Better."
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Reviewed By: INNY/INDIRA On: October 25, 2003 17:34 CDT
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Goku is singing in Trunks' dream goku: say you wanna change my life! say ypu wanna hurt my wife! lalala!! it might sound strange, but I saw this in one of my hallucinations...I can also remember that trunks was really happy o.o keep up the goooood work ! -xxx- inny
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Reviewed By: red dragon On: October 18, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this fic!! it's so funny and creative.....keep up the great work and update as much as possible...plz....ur my idol!
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Reviewed By: indira On: October 16, 2003 10:46 CDT
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I'm going to read you fic again!!! 24 chapters right? :D
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Reviewed By: Inny, indira or spinach On: October 15, 2003 12:33 CDT
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WOOOOWWW that chappy was...TOTALLY HORNY (NOT litterly!) You make me happy! You are brilliant! but uhmm I already told you that like 8273548125 times so I will just shut up now. Do you hate it too when your little brother is eating the book you just gave him! that was not...nice I think. He is a HELLRAZER! I had a beautiful and very rare DBZ card...AND HE DESTROYED IT!THE HORROR AHHHHHH...!!! I'm writing a fanfic too, but i really don't know how to put it on ff.net or mm.org... 0_o I really think I'm stupid...I probably AM too.-_-' NEVERMIND ALL THAT!!!! now, back to your fic. With most of the fanfictions I read, It's always like there are parts writting that I don't like, but with this fic I like it all...that's pretty rare.(That's really hard for me to explain that in english) YOUR FIC IS THE BEST! okay bye bye! I'm gonna stop now. please write more some time...my brain is hungry. =)
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo, Metallica's Mistress On: September 05, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaay Carrie, that's the best movie ever. *Clears throat* anyways how about you have Goku annoy Vegeta with kung fu fighting hamsters of doom. And have Trunks admire it too much to the point of scaring everyone, except Goku cause he's too dumb =P It would be just too hillarious. |
Reviewed By: Bugsygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 17:00 CDT
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Wait...what are gliding ferrets? They sound chewy. |
Reviewed By: FeZzLe On: August 22, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaah 24 chapters of pure hilarity. I love it but you should really include the gliding ferrets...theyre getting lonely. Oh yeah Zaire does have a national anthem tralalalala! |
Reviewed By: Tha Sayjin Kira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 01:37 CDT
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my boyfriend would liek you to know he thinks you are comedic gold, I just think you are fucking hilarious, and I will take my free yougart please! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 05:02 CDT
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
GUMMY BEARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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