| "But I Won't Say That" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 03:17 CDT
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The good times just keep on coming. The image of the sqirrel heads turning 360 degrees was spooky but was also good for a laugh. Keep 'em coming. I don't know where the hell you get your ideas from but they're brilliant. |
Reviewed By: Goat On: July 14, 2003 23:20 CDT
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I don't like reviewing so I don't do so often. I can never think of what to say other than that was good or you completly suck. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, oh god, that was hilarious. Do some more things with Trunks having a crush on Goku. Those parts were just too funny. Not to mention the cookies. And the stupid tree thing ROFL. |
Reviewed By: The Lecturess On: July 13, 2003 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny! I laughed my ass off! Keep it up man don't stop! Hey maby even have them bust out some Modonna or Micheal Jackson moves or something. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 02:36 CDT
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Now that I think about it, Piccolo and Vegeta do kinda sound the same. And I like the way that you used past chapters in this one, (the pudding and the fridge light)
YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! THERE'S GONNA BE MORE! WOOHOO!
Look at me, only 8:40 in the morning and I'm already hyped. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 02:30 CDT
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Ok, I'll admit, not bad for a 10 year old. Hope they liked their suggestions coming up. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 12:55 CDT
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I dunno, I always have a good laugh at the bears. I don't know how a bear making a bed out of toilet paper sells the stuff but it seems to work.
THAT WAS, as usual, SOOOOOOOO FUNNY! I'M LAUGHING SO HARD MY SIDES HURT!! ARE YOU GONNA CONTINUE? |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 12:50 CDT
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YEAH! YOU UPDATED! WOOHOO!!!!!!
Thanks for the reply. I'll look into that when I have a free moment. But do I see more cookies ahead. I'm gonna read it.
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
(Don't mind me, I've had too much sugar today.) |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 12:18 CDT
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Bwaa haa haa!! Shot with arrows made from the stupid tree. That is way too funny! Thanks for all the laughs. Makes work a lot more tolerable ;) |
Reviewed By: Bugsygurl On: July 04, 2003 22:31 CDT
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The pic has been added to my "fanart" something or other. I'm still not used to this site, even *I* can't find it. NONE of the pics on this site are working for me, even the front page pics. If someone REALLY wants to see it, you can join my DBZ screen grabs group. I have the pic in question in the FILES section. That's the only other way I know of to see it, since I forget the addy of the site I found it on....am I making sense?
Anyway, here's the link:
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ATMsDBZScreenGrabs
If THAT doesn't work, I dunno what to tell ya. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 02:43 CDT
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Ok, that kinda cleared a few things up for me, thanks. Where's this picture gonna be posted? You've got me interested here.
Still, well done on another great chapter. The part where Gohan gets attacked by a wild boar cracked me up. Especially the part when Goku sends him to his room for not bringing it home. Awwwww. Poor Gohan. |
Reviewed By: Bugsygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I RATED MYSELF!!
ahem, anyway, I just wanted to thank all of you lovely new people for all your.....lovely.....reviews. (I couldn't think of another word besides lovely)
As I've said on my profile...thing....this was originally posted at fanfiction.net, but because they SUCK and deleted it for being of the...."list" type, it's now here. That whole "exam week" thing was from when school just ended, so that was written about a month ago...for anyone that cares...annnnnd that "Eastenders" bit was written by someone in England me thinks. She reviewed and told me what it was about. I had no clue, I don't watch the BBC or International channel to see these shows. I've never even heard of it. Hell, I don't even watch soap operas here in America!
Most of the extra stuff that wasn't written by me was written by past reviewers at ff.net, so if anyone one HERE wants to submit some of their own, or give me any ideas, I'll be glad to add them in here. I used to get a lot of emails from people wanting me to add stuff, but...reviews work too.
As for me watching the Simpsons or Friends, no I don't watch them while I write. Most of it just comes from my messed up brain, but SOMETIMES I will be watching TV and hear a commercial I'd like to have Goku do, and start a-writin'. My dad has every episode of the Simpsons on tape (VHS) and has all their songs on CD though. He's pretty messed up...
Man, I haven't watched Friends in a while, when does it even come on?? I like Chandler and Pheobe, they rock!
Yes dragonheart, the tulip bit does kinda sound like when Bart noticed Homer's mysterious trips to Holland...weird. It wasn't meant to be but...heh, I guess it kinda was.
I'm glad I could cheer you up after eating bad macaroni. I know how that can be. It's a traumatic experience.
To answer whos-ever question it was: "Will Goku ever find out that Trunks is in love with him?" I don't know honestly. I got the idea that Trunks was gay from...well watching him! He's so obviously gay! More-so in the Japanese version (don't hate me), and I saw a doujinshii one time with Trunks telling Goku SOMETHING that made Goku run away. Was he telling him that he wanted to steal his booty? Maaaaaybeeeeeee....it just fueled my belief. Perhaps I shall post the pic so you can see what I mean...hmmm, I think I will when I'm through blabbing here.
And on the topic of Trunks having purple hair...I always figured it was Akira Toryima (or whatever) that decided to give him purple hair, because Bulma had purple hair in the manga. But that's a good idea. Veggie DID kinda look like he had reddish type hair.
Anywayzzzzzzz, thanks all you reviewers, you rock somethin' awesome! I'm glad that I'm not the only one who appreciates pudding, and people ramming into people's butts during leapfrog. That one's my personal favorite actually. How I came up with it, I haven't a clue... |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:33 CDT
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Why am I not urprised with that last part from Goku? Oh well, guess thats why we love the big mutt.
If this is gonna be updated then please do it soon. Do you watch Friends or The Simpsons whilst typing or something? These are so good. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:29 CDT
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Aw. Poor Trunks. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 06:50 CDT
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Hey, I get most of my ideas off Eastenders story lines.
Me and my little sis came up with a theory for why Trunks' hair is purple:
If you'll remember in the beinning of Dragonball Z, Vegeta had reddish hair. Now, then it suddenly went from a very dark red to black almost overnight. So, what if he had found some black hair dye in his space pod and had been secretly dying his hair ever since? Bulma's hair is blue. So what do you get when you mix red and blue? PURPLE!!!
Still, great fic. LOL!!!!!!!!!!LOL, LOL, LOL!! |
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