| "Destiny's Path" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Asgeras
Reviewed By: Asgeras [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good fic so far. It's been a while since you've updated, but I'm not giving up hope as of yet. I've seen older fics make comeback and I certainly hope to see this fic updated in the future.
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Reviewed By: Ranchan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is a bit confusing sometimes, also the dragon whisker part is all wrong. ranma was cured from it a long time back.
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Reviewed By: Tigerclaw44 On: December 14, 2003 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is that you are one kickass author and I never get tired of reading your stories.
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Reviewed By: Digital Penman On: December 07, 2003 16:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I"m somewhat lost in the story, knowing neither full plotlines involved in the story, but it seems to be progressing well from a story point of view. As usual Arch, you're doing a bang-up job. Been wondering for a bit where you've been, but good comeback. I guess I"ll catch ya later. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man!!, it was like.... and then there was, then.... and then Ranma......then Hotaru.... Then there was..... *patting him on the back* My friend, I,am buying you a pizza!! *reaches into his pockets, but they are empty* Umm.... I'll have to get back to you on that pizza, but seriously, that was great.
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: September 03, 2003 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Ranma is a much more mature one compared to canon. Maybe this was bacause Kasumi and he started as friends/confidants from the start? I would like to see that explored further, which you can do if you go for a brother/sister relationship between Ranma and Hotaru. |
Reviewed By: Kolock On: September 03, 2003 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. A nice play on the plot of Ranma leaves it all behind. I like how you added in Hotaru into the story line as well. You might want to add a bit of flashbacks later on dealing with the build up of Ranma getting ready to leave Nerima. It will interesting to see how you meld Shampoo into this story as well. Well I hope to see more of this story as time goes by. Good job and good luck. |
