| "Clone" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: love_anime_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:58 CDT
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its suppose to b marik... not merrik... or merrick.... or merric... or meric.... or merick... or merik either.... itz with an a not an e.... and single r... cant remember right now whether u spelled it with two r's or one r... o well.... --->Marik
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Reviewed By: Savara On: April 07, 2004 19:55 CDT
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Savara: Woops. Bad keyboard! *gentally taps keyboard.* I meant Merrik.Spelling error. *computer blows up.* sigh...
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Reviewed By: Savara On: April 07, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Savara:Well, I just wanted to tell you before some people show up... Raven: You talking about me? Rena:Yeah ya bitch! Savara:*sigh* my other personalities are cussing me out again... Oh well... I LOVED IT!!!! Rena: what did you wanna tell her dunce? Savara:Oh, yeah. I just wanted to tell you that it's not spelled Merrick, it's spelled Marik. Don't feel bad. That's how I thought you spelled it first too. WRITE ON!
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Reviewed By: WINGNGED DRAGON RA On: October 16, 2003 18:53 CDT
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:( HOW DARE U END IT U HAVE ANGERED THE GODS
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Title: no
Reviewed By: no On: September 13, 2003 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
nononononono how dare you end it i liked your story! :'( |
Title: who cares
Reviewed By: maroku On: September 11, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O how dare you end the story! YOU CANT DO THAYT U JUST JUMPED FROM THE BEGINING TO THE END! i though u had great potentiaol for the story then you had to end it just like that i am very disappointed in you! *oh great i am sounding like my mother!* but still i think you can make it longer! |
Reviewed By: ChaosDragon On: August 04, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL! Yea! Yami's okay! ^-^ I'm SO glad! Keep it up! I LOVE it! |
Reviewed By: Katya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sad! I love angst, and you do such a good job with it.
What an incredibly interesting story. I've never seen anything like this before; I really enjoyed it.
I do hope you update this soon. It's very good.
On that note, please think about posting this on fanfiction.net. It's not bad, so you can get away with rating it R. Believe me, alot of the R fics on ff.n are terrible. There is a huge lack of good fics on there, and I'm sure your fic would do very well. A LOT of people use FF.N, so you'll get alot of reviews (mind you, people can be pretty stupid on there, too...lol)
Excellent fic. Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:44 CDT
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Poor Ryou, and poor Yami! I hope you gets better. Please post more soon! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!! |
Reviewed By: ChaosDragon On: July 23, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOO GOOD! I LOVE IT! ^___^ KEEP IT UP!!! POOR YAMI!!! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really cool story IDEA, but you need to work on your spelling and punctuation so it's easier to read. ALL your dialogue is punctuated incorrectly -- what's with the commas after everything AND outside the end quotation marks??
If you're not sure how to punctuate correctly, check out one of the many free grammar guides on-line for help, not only with the proper way to punctuate dialogue, but also the difference betweeen "you're" and "your". ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jadejj On: July 15, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very different kind of story ;) please keep typing |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 20:53 CDT
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Well, this is really interesting so far. I think it's cool that you made Yami the clone rather than Yuugi. I think most writers would have made Yuugi and probably Jou the clone like they are pretty much always the slaves in other stories. I like this a lot. I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 21:51 CDT
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this sounds really kewl so far. The clone is Yami right? I think that is what it said ^^; whatever. Please update this soon...I gotta feel bad for yami(the clone) he's being treated like an animal!!!! [huggles yami] oh well, please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 16:25 CDT
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hey--
i like this idea...it's very original. when i first started reading it, i thought that yugi was going to end up being the "clone" instead of yami. oh well, i guess either way works. i look forward to reading more!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones On: July 07, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy!!!! we like this so we want you to write more, we found the fic verry enjoyable and hope you will continue |
Reviewed By: dum mud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty cool so far, can't wait for you to continue! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 12:23 CDT
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Interesting. I hope you post more soon! I'm interested to see how Yuugi reacts to the clone. Could you make the chapters a little longer though? |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
More! |
Reviewed By: chaotic kat On: July 02, 2003 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
neat! keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Rei On: July 01, 2003 11:18 CDT
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^^ Yugi clone! yay! Yami! ^^ I think your fic ideas are sooo cool! But ya need to make your chappies longer! :O |
