| "One Night Stand" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: tenshiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. one of the best i have read. 2 thumbs up man |
Reviewed By: League of Jewish Skinheads On: July 02, 2003 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not your best individual piece but a good one all the same. This bunch of Jews can't actually name another lemon-juicer so open about his desires or prepared to show such uncompromising audacity. The odd dent's found its way into your usually-excellent spelling and grammar (at one point you've written "whole" "whore") but we won't weep. Congratulations also on being able to plausibly chart the muddier recesses of Ritsuko's mind: we've no difficulty believing that she could do these things. |
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Psaiyan, you are so much better a lemon writer than I, it makes me sick!
You even invent better euphemisms for ejaculate than I do!
I bow before the Master. *bows*
The only reason I didn't give you a 10 for originality is because nothing kinky happened. :)
Very nice fic. Bravo. *claps* |
Reviewed By: [NPH] On: July 01, 2003 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY love your style.
Definitely original.
Spelling and grammar are top notch. I only noticed 1 misspelled word, but not enough to take your rating down.
And there is no way I couldn't enjoy this. |
