| "Office Tales: Story One" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. It was an interesting turn adding the office workers POV in that situation. I also find it very funny on how that host got sacked real fast. The game was a really nice touch, and the fantasies, HOT! Nice work.
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Title: O_O!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DEAR RA WRITE MORE!!! Yes i liked this fic, and if you haven't written the sequel yet you should.
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Title: UPDATE DAMNIT!!!
Reviewed By: ShamelessObsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Dude! Update! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! It's the best thing like, ever!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Onua W. On: October 28, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove this story. This is the kind of fic I've been looking for. You've captured everything I love about Seto, Yugi, and Yami! Chapter 3 was awesome. Can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: sparky On: July 16, 2003 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
wowers that was great, I love that couple, but only when seto and yami weren't pass lovers and they really both want yugi the most. I hope you're gonna continue. I'd qppreciate it muches. |
Reviewed By: SSProcyonShields [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^;;;;; I must have more, up date soon or my muses will haunt you forever, and they haunt me as it is. So, all hope is futile.
I pray you update soon I really do wish to read what happen when they enact their fantasies, and other fantasies. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 23:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really interesting. I liked the last chapter and their little game. I thought it was funny when Kaiba realized what Mokuba had told Yuugi and said that he would kill Mokuba slowly and painfully to get back at him. I hope you do more of this soon! |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to make a sequel to this fic. |
