| "Kagome, The Half Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: COOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please tell me you're going to update soon because i like that story oh please update P.s. please tell me that kagome stays a demon i think that would be sooooo cool....well great story keep up the good work update soon plz
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Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 04:48 CST
Comment/Review:
p.s. your story wasnt confusing so dont worry :)
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Title: Update Soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story , hell its wicked awesome , you should update because im dying to see what happens next , does this guy try to take her and make her his mate/ is koga in the story ? and what about kirara ? just wondering , well great fic update soon !!! much love to ya =)
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Reviewed By: Atliskflower On: February 07, 2004 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but you need to work on your spelling alittle more. All-in-all, It was really good. ~Atliskflower~
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: July 18, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a little confusing 'cuz the paragraphs don't change when a different person talks. other than that, i like it! update soon! |
Reviewed By: cooooolll On: July 18, 2003 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it! you've got a really great story going on, so keep updating! it's a little bit confusing because the paragraphs don't change when a different person talks. but other than that, i like it! |
Reviewed By: Kagome421230 On: July 16, 2003 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...cool. you should have Inuyasha like falling really maddly in love with her. And u should make it perminant. It was good can't wait to see whats next...bye |
Reviewed By: jtyler321 On: July 03, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it but some to much swaring and it dosint rilly make sense but i still like it |
Reviewed By: RoXxie On: July 02, 2003 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was confusing at first but it gets exciting at the end, keeping the readers in suspense when they the characters found out that the demon is Kagome. The story was cool and original and even though it had several spelling/grammar errors, it didn't mess up what the author meant to write. There's a big conflict and the story went straight to the point, while being a little descriptive at the same time. |
