"A New Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: update Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 18:32 CST Comment/Review: hon... its been almost a year since your last update... come on... you've got to update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jewel Peri On: December 04, 2004 05:06 CST Comment/Review: grrr... you'd better update soon... please?
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Title: ORO Reviewed By: Tsukasa-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 12:21 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Elfs!? Holy Nyquil! Wow im sry for hitting u on the head with my hammer... Now u write about elfs. **thinking to self...If my hammer ca make her write about elfs them think what a giant hammer could do!. Opps im thinking aloud angan! damnit i hae to stop doing that!**** Aki's got a headach (speaking in third or w/e person again) Aki's going to passout now buhbi ***dead*** @_@x
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Title: Taeniaea Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 01:37 CST Comment/Review: I love it UPDATE it soon !!!
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 19:39 CST Comment/Review: GREAT WHATS NEXT PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Atliskflower On: February 07, 2004 15:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: It was interesting at first, but as the story went on it got off the subject and it wasn't interesting anymore. You started with Sesshoumaru and ended up with someone else!? It didn't make since. At first I thought it was a mistake, but as I read on the story stayed changed. :( ~Atliskflower~
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Reviewed By: Joselin On: February 07, 2004 10:29 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story so far PLEASE continue. (I am completly confused by the elf dude, good job most storys I can guess the plot amost instantly! HAPPY BITHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 11:49 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a really good fic,I like how you make Roji so mysterious and sweet,even while angry, and plotting revenge! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 18:22 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You're good at fight scenes! I'll be waiting for the next chapt, so keep up the awesome writing! |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:19 CDT Comment/Review: You have one more chapt posted up & I have to get off!!! Well.....I'm still tellin you to update! Howabout if I asked? Pleaded? Kuso! I've gotta go. Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:12 CDT Comment/Review: Ummm...as far as I know 'dream' is 'Yumi' in Japanese, which ya probably know by now since I'm a late reader. Oh well. Such is life. ....Now why in all of Taskar did I say that? Yeah, I'm loosin it..... |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:00 CDT Comment/Review: Oh! She told! This Chris does seem really cool! Oops! I'm on a time limit now, so you probably wont be seeing many of my pointless comments. |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:53 CDT Comment/Review: Midoriko! It would make her Midoriko, right? What? Well, ya told me to review! You didn't say it had to make sense. |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:50 CDT Comment/Review: Hmmm...Well, it'd be heart ache. But that's only a mis-spell. Just thought I'd point it out before I went on to the next chapt.... |
Reviewed By: Kenya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 15:49 CDT Comment/Review: Why is it that no one ever reviews! oh the pain of being a writter just ripes out your heart and leaves it for the animals and magot and wut not to feed on. OH THE INHUMANITY! |
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