"BLADE WHY ARE YOU IN THE...SHADE?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: chibby gaki On: July 13, 2003 19:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well i do have one question .....how can u go from december8 2058 to present day janyary 30 2057 haha please tell me one |
Reviewed By: Chibby Gaki On: July 05, 2003 21:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: .......all the things she said......
ok....um this was relly stupid u fucking whore
hahahahahahahhahajp this was some funny shit and hope u write more like um about...NOW!!
haha its the bomb and i cant wait to find out who slaps you::watch it be mistress niimura::
I love you and I miss you very much I just feel like leaving my house and go to the ironbound and look for you and give u a big hug and was to kiss youe beautiful and sexy face...Ja-NE u have to read my fic haha |
Reviewed By: Malice Kyo DeG [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 18:02 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: .... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..ok Poozin..this is the funniest shit i have ever read. Keep on writing..and WHY I'M I NOT IN IT!!!!
Bakura's Mistress is in it Y not me Mistress Niimura!!?? I'm Gonna Send Haru and Kyo to kick your ass if u dont put me in it!! Other wise it was kick ass! ..now if u will excuse me have to whip Kyo and Haru!Ja~ne! BYE! (>'.')> |
Reviewed By: panic_relic On: July 03, 2003 10:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow that was sooo good and its was funny. i hope you add alot of other character from alot of different shows. i see now u cant spell curse words.ahahahahha. well i liked it so keep on writing and hurry up with the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 08:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HAhahaahah.... oh my god! susy that was hilarious! i cant believeve you actually wrote this story!! hahahaha... and you put joey in there too!!! well that was the funniest fanfic i have read thus far...so continue if not for anyone but me...im under your shiva powers and you have my undying loyalty as your number one fan^_^...anyway hurry with the next chappie i wanna know who slaps you...me or someone much worse?....(whip)owwww!!! ...oh yeah Bakura says hi...damn bastar- (whip!!) ahhh!! sorry ..sorry.. |