| "Broken and Bleeding" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: It's pretty good
Reviewed By: Maykiyma16 On: March 15, 2005 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good, but I think instead of him going back to the very person that took the only thing yami had away I think he should plan revenge on him that be so cool cause all of yugi's friends would be helping him, and it would sort of an "Ocean's Eleven" kinda thing.
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Reviewed By: ...o.0 On: January 21, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww.;-; that sent me to tears...
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Title: WAAAAAAAAAAAH!
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 18:55 CDT
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*is crying heavily* Why did you kill him? *huggles Yugi's corpse* Wait, why am I hugging him, when I love Malik and Mokuba? *grabs them and crawls over to bed*
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 10:43 CDT
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WHY THE HELL DOES YUGI ALWAYS DIE?!?!?!? noooo my chibi tenshi!!!! you have taken him from me!! *drops to knees* WHHHYYYY GOD WHHHYYY????
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Reviewed By: Tuuli On: March 08, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job - although heartbraking. (One thing though, it's spelled 'aibou', not 'abiou'.)
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Reviewed By: Dark Kitten On: July 06, 2003 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give to thee an eight, Seto is played wonderfully; however, I doubt that Yami would ever go to Seto if anything, I would believe he would kill him for taken Yugi away. Least that's what I Would do if I was Yami.
Other than that litte fact, it was a great story and I await for thee to make the nest. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 03:13 CDT
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Whoah. That was weird- good, but weird... |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic was good as hell! and you succeeded because it was good as hell, my master Bakura is pleased as well^_^ well thats cool, your 14! yay! and I'm 16! hahaha im so old.... but no one is older than my master he like an old man-(whip!!) owwwww! im so sorrry master! i didnt mean it that way- (whip!!) ahhhhh!!! im sorry! im sorry!
"Ingorant fool, stop your whinning" Bakura hisses
(whip) (whip!) (whip!!) ahhhh!!!....im sorry sir!
(whispers)...anyway good ficcie im waiting impatiently for the next!!^_^ oh and hell ya i love the angst!! angst! angst! angst! hell you should read my ficcie, someone like you (who likes the angst, hehehe) should read it...its called, Tainted Reflection ^_^ im so proud of it! okay well got to go...(looks at bakura who withdraws his trusty blade from his pocket) ohhh crap! (runs for her life) JA NE!!!! |
Reviewed By: dum mud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was cool!! Wierd kinda, but cool!! I'll give ya a ten cause if I rate your stories compared to mine than well, it would be off the charts. Love yer stories!! ^_~ |
