| "Deprived" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: SonSofia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet damn! That was HOT! I love the two-saiyans and-a-blue-haired-broad threesomes! Man, that was so good. Bulma is the luckiest woman, and ChiChi, well...it's her loss, Bulma and Vegeta's gain!
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 02:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
GODDAMN IT BULMA!!! ISN'T IT ENOUGH THAT YOU HAVE `GETA?!?!?! LEAVE SOME FOR THE REAST OF US!!! *anime eye twitch* great fic! hope goku enjoyed his dinner....
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 03, 2004 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
lovely! lemony! I am a card holding member of "Chi Chi is a bitch and must die" club! That is great!
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Title: HOT!
Reviewed By: Megumi star * On: September 14, 2003 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very very hot! I've always liked the thought of a Vegeta/Bulma/Goku lemon 3-some. That was really good, one of the best I have read!
One thing, there were a few spelling mistakes and a couple of grammer errors, but nothing too bad!
Very good one-shot, I plan to take a look at some of your other work. |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this.. 280 visits and only 1 review!! Tch,tch!! |
Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
Fun fun fun! Very juicy lemon. I LOVE it!! Good job ;) You must write more *grins* |
