| "Not What You Think" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! That's really good! I can't wait to see another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Sourcery On: July 07, 2003 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is so great! poor Yami... You just gotta continue! pwease? |
Reviewed By: silent fires On: July 03, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should continue! this is really good! I dont think i've ever seen this type of story line used before. it's good to see a new idea. pleez continue! and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wun more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so sad....yet on another level, so sweet.....
...^^; yea, im wierd.... |
Reviewed By: Neko-Shi On: July 03, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww! It's so sad! :sniffels and wipes at her teary chibi eyes: I want more! I want to know why Seth never loved Pharaoh Yami! :grumbles and kicks small rock: Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: ('oo') On: July 03, 2003 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this! I've never seen Yami-chan cry before...*looks over at Yami*But I KNEW you had something going on with Kaiba-kun!! Onegai....more! ^^; |
