| "Heartbreak and Second Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Very well written
Reviewed By: Anouk On: December 20, 2003 01:29 CST
Comment/Review:
when will the next chapter go up? I can't wait!
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Title: Awesome Story
Reviewed By: BH On: December 15, 2003 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! And I love the new angle you've given it by making Squall blind. Don't get me wrong, I feel awful for him, but it's a good kind of awful. I can't wait till the next chapter. I hope it goes up soon!
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Title: all chapter after 1
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: December 15, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, Im glad Squall kickes Zells ass! He needed it, wonder what Seifs gonna do with him and Squall sharing a room!! Ja ne!!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: November 22, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, but I think Zell's a bastard for being so cruel to Squall, and I want to read more, this is awesome, but poor Siefer having to keep his hands to himself, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: chaotic kat On: July 07, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it.... show those two idiots (z/r) what their missing.. |
