| "Human" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: Y.A.17 On: April 13, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz you can't end it there you have to write more plz i'm begging you plz plz plzplz plz plz plz....................
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Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samuai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it but i think it can't just end there
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 00:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Kawaaaaaaiii!!!! I honestly hadn't expected a proposal (especially so soon,) but it's GOOD! AND CUTE! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Chas On: November 08, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, love it love it, love it! You portray Seto's sensitive little heart so well! *cough* I mean, not that's he's weak or anything... But really, this is an exellent story. And I will die if you do not write more. You don't want me to die, now do you? DO YOU?
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this fic was amazing, really good!! Sequel?
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Reviewed By: Violet Eyes and Kuribo-kun [too lazy to log in] [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Violet Eyes: Wow, that was so good. Kuribo-kun: Yeah, and you managed to thaw out the Ice Prince's heart. Violet Eyes: And thank you sooo much for mentioning us. Seto: Yeah, and somebody finally understands me [kisses the Female Inu Yasha] Kuribo-kun and Violet Eyes: See, he likes you! And please, continue with this marvellous ficcy!
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Reviewed By: Egypt Kaiba On: September 21, 2003 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue it's rare to find good Seto/Oc's fics anywhere. |
Reviewed By: Seto Kaiba On: July 27, 2003 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome fic. please continue it, and as for ur questions Guzaburo he he beat on seto everytime he got the chance and he also made him do a lot of work, he told seto that emotions are for the weak and that he should'nt have any. seto's step father cut seto with all kinds of sharp objects. and he also raped Seto over and over.
I hope that the info i gave is of some help. |
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Violet Eyes: Wow, totally different approach to Seto Kaiba.
Kuribo-kun: Cool fic you've got going here, I love it!
Seto: Poor me
Violet Eyes: Anyway, please continue! I begging you! Oh, and the way you make the characters out, too good for words. Normally I don't like reading fics with OCs, but yours was too good. |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
LEMONLEMONCITRUSLIME!!!!! Pwease? The story is easily one of the best i've read in a long time. The characters are so well developed, the situations are so realistic, i see real emotion in this story. Plus, Seto! His stoicism (i think that's a word...)is so real, his discovering the possibility that he loves Li... Keep going! |
Reviewed By: Angel25302 On: July 07, 2003 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good, but lots of people Valentines in their fics and some that I've read seem similar to yours. It's a pretty good fic, so keep on writing it. |
Reviewed By: T_M [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, I like it ::shivers at the whole wrist cutting thing:: but I do understand why most people do it, so I don't blame most. And Kaiba prob would, he's had it tough ^-^
Well write some more, soon
~Asha |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad!!! I like this fic. Just make it move a bit faster.
To answer your questions, I did a bit of research and came up with these:
1. Honda's last name is Hiroto
2. Katsuya is Jou's first name, but, as you probably know, people generally call him Jou, or, in Kaiba's case, inu/dog.
3.Gozaburo Kaiba, Seto Kaiba's stepfather, treated and tortured Seto cruelly to make him prone to emotions and become the nearly heartless bastard he is today. When Gozaburo started thinking about doing the same thing to Mokuba, Seto pushed him out the window, killing him. |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for one don't know hos to spell that. but for another thing thats like an idea well story i've started writing but alot more sadder... anyways write more. you've got a nice story going. write more soon.Sincerely,
are you happy now? |
