| "The Quest" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Relix On: January 20, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Longer chapters!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: January 16, 2004 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare you flame this story "lani" this is a really good story, all it needs is to be alittle reorganized. But other than that this story kix ass. Please update!
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Reviewed By: Kenshin_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 11:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this isent bad. just keep it up ok? |
Reviewed By: Lani On: August 21, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but I really don't like this fic. It's a mostly original concept, but your spelling and grammar leaves a lot to be desired. And Terra has certain Mary-Sue qualities. The style of writing is okay, but I can barely read what you're writing. Try using spell-check. It's your spelling that gets me the most.
I'm not trying to be mean, it's just that based on this story, it seems that you can't spell and have a shaky grasp of grammar rules. I could understand the occasional typo (no one's perfect. I'm not expecting you to be.), but half your fic has misspelt words, or bad grammar. (i.e., proper nouns, such as names, has the first letter capitalized.) If I were you, I'd take it off mm.org, go back, fix all the typos and errors, then re-post it. I bet you would even get more reviews. =) |
Reviewed By: angel_called_heather [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good. It does need some working on the writing, though. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Inu-Libby On: July 09, 2003 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is pretty cool, though i wish your chapters were longer. oh well |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you push view you get more |
