| "When the Past Meets the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: MWA On: November 25, 2003 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! please update it. She is pregnant, and they are having sex. What's up with that?
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jennybear91169 On: September 24, 2003 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trunksfrodovegeta On: September 19, 2003 08:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is from the story True Loves Conquers All |
Reviewed By: Critic On: August 23, 2003 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
No offense, but you really need a beta-reader. Your punctuation is all messed up; for example, you have 3 complete clauses strung together without a period in sight...at least put in a semicolon or FANBOYS+ comma Having the correct verb tense is also important. Having grammatically correct work definitely improves the quality of your work. |
Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE this story and can't wait for youto continue it!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Crecy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to hear you updated. This story is going to get good, I can tell. You have good idea's and I haven't heard or read of any story similiar to it. ^_^ Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Crecy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="purple">Interesting story so far. Sure, I wouldn't mind if you e-mail me when you update. The story is just getting good. ^_~ |
