| "Love and war" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuheart On: July 09, 2003 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMG!!! I love this story sooo much!!!! I can just see Inuyasha as a Gang leader and Kikyo as a bitch. (Since she is one) Kagome, Sango and Rin as gangsta girls? Hell yeah! Well anyways I love this freakin movie so much that I wish someone would turn it into a movie. Love the whole plot.Other ppl have been writing gang fanfics but this is definetly the best out of all of them. It has more action, a better plot, better use of character and I llove the way that you weave humor into the story.
In short, THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM BEGGIN YOU!!!! |
Reviewed By: inu's slave On: July 09, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great ive read a lot of stories where inuyasha was a gang member but this one is so far the best. i like how u kept the love triangle going. ur idea is really great and origanal. ur spelling was great unlike some stories ive read. i like how u were very detailed throughout the hole story.really all i have left to say is wow. can u please write the next chapter soon im dieing to know what happens to kagome and inuyasha next. ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Inu-fan On: July 09, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a suggestion for the next club outfit for Kagome, Rin, and Sango : Kagome has on a black bikini top, a black mini-skirt, and black strappy sandals. Sango(same thing only in silver) Rin (same thing only in white).
I think you should make them sneak out and then get caught by thier men.
*By the way, the Inu-fan tells all of you readers to review this fanfic.
The Inu-fan also is also telling inu luva(author of this fanfic) that inu luva has done a great job on Love and War and that inu luva should update soon |
Reviewed By: jazzy On: July 06, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic i hope you update it really soon!! |
Reviewed By: Tiger Lord of the North [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 09:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it keep at it. whats gonna happen next?
Tiger Lord of the North |
Reviewed By: FireKat On: July 06, 2003 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I hadn't wanted to read this because I thought it was going to be like all of the other fics that were centered around a gang, but yours just doesn't seem the same. You're writing style is great and once I started reading, I just couldn't stop. Thanks for the great fic and I hope you continue. |
Reviewed By: Eiko On: July 05, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic. it is so well writen, i can hardly wait to see what comes next. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 05, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daaaamn! dis fic kix major ass man!! u gotta update soon on it!! i cant wait to read tha rest of it! tha only thing i didnt like was tha whole kikyo screwin him and kagome walkin in...omg i was finna cry! lol anyways keep writin it iight pimp! lataz ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BSASAMI153 On: July 05, 2003 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read many fanfics and some involves gangs or mobsters, you are one of many that have written great reading material. AAAHHH...You left me hanging for more chapters. Pleaseee...update. |
Reviewed By: hishiro On: July 05, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...very nice..I have read another IY fic concerning the mob but it was crap....nice job. I cannot wait for you to update. |
Reviewed By: Inu-fan On: July 05, 2003 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10 because this fanfic has all of the things a good fanfic should have. I hope you update soon, great fic. |
Reviewed By: nekobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow - i love it - its like one of those books that you just cant put down you know? - guess that would be the reason im just finishiing it now at 1.30am
I cant wait for more!
Always did think jaken was a rotten little toad :-p |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. This is one of the best I have ever read. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa that was an amazing story! please update n soon! damn i wish they had higher than a 10 on the enjoyment factor... |
Reviewed By: MikoKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 10:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic please update from mikokagome |
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