| "Don't Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 20, 2004 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice.:wink:
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 20, 2004 17:19 CDT
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You want to tell me what happened to you??? You haven't updated since september!!!!! That is so cruel!!!!! To leave a cliff for that long!!!! And don't you dare say it was school!!! I go to school and finished two original stories, two song fics, a one-shot, and I'm still going!!!!!!!! And that threesome didn't win me over at all, nope, no, not one bit. *looks around nervously because she knows shes lying!* Okay well maybe a little^_^ So are ya gonna update from now on??? Well you should know that there were some miss-spelled words, some of those 'of's' need to be changed to 'off's'. And at one point I think you were talking about Kagome's high 'pitched' screams but you wrote high 'bitched' screams. So is Sesshoumaru thinking about getting a human mate because we're more fun to have sex with??? Hopefully you'll update soon and answer the question.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. EXCELLENT STORY.
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Reviewed By: BloodTh1rst On: June 17, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last time I read this fic.was over nine months ago, then it had fifteen chapters. I'm reading it again,nine months later,and you have not updated it again yet. In your last note ,at the bottom of ch. fifteen, you said that you got another penname...I was wondering if you could send it to me? Also ,if somehow I'm missing something and you DID/HAVE updated your fic."Don't Cry". could you send it to me? DaughterofDemons@juno.com THANKS! I LOVE YOUR FANFIC. STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: bonkers231 On: June 15, 2004 11:49 CDT
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This is a really good fic. PLEASE write more chapters. I love the way Sesshoumaru is being so nice, not that I dont love the cold harted Sesshoumaru, Kouga and Kagome thats so kool. Well all in all this a grate fic and I cant wait for more chapters. keep up the good work and thanks for a grate fic.*BIG SMILE* :D
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORETHIS STORY! The last time you updated was in September 2003, I hate to bring this to your attention but it's already Marrch 2004. Please update soon. ~Ciao, Dreaming_girl
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Reviewed By: SeaGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a great story..can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
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Title: don't cry
Reviewed By: me On: February 07, 2004 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: goddess pure On: January 28, 2004 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your a excellent writer. i have never wrote a review before so i'm new at this.i love the way you turned the story around to fit your own creativity.i look forward to the next chaper(s).
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 00:52 CST
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Are you gonna update soon because I think I had a nightmare about the fic.
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo good i hope you can update soon whay happens to kouga? your characters have a little bit of ooc in them.
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Title: Great Fanfic
Reviewed By: IceGodess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I read this fic on Fanfiction.net and I still like to re-read it!Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Silver1 On: November 07, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this...but you haven't update for a while...and left us all hanging! Please please please update soonest!
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 31, 2003 06:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowie! Love the story! Is this Kouga/Kag or Sess/Kag, hard to tell right now...^-^ Ja ne! Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to finish this story! I've got to find out what happens to my poor Inuyasha! And are you for real Sess and Kag got to do the dirty!? OOH I bet Kouga's ganna be maaaaaddddd!!!!!
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