"Don't Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jam On: July 23, 2003 16:47 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn cliff hangers I hate cliff hangers.
If you ask me it'sthe worst thing in the whol world, it's even worst than the "To Be Continued's" in TV
Any way what I'm trying to say in a polite way is " When are You Going To Update This Thing? "
Oh! One more thing I Looooooooooooovvvvveee Your Ffic. |
Reviewed By: HanyouFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 14:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey this is a good story and all but...... u have to hurry up and update u started to make peoples mad... just thought u should know lol
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: LadyFang On: July 21, 2003 01:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Put more romantic tension in it. |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 On: July 21, 2003 01:00 CDT Comment/Review: I believe I reviewed already, but you need to do this ASAP!!! This is such a wonderful story! But why are you making Sess0chan the bad guy!? WHY!? I think you should make it a love triangle with Fluffy, Koug, and Kagome. Just a suggestion to make it a little more interesting. L/L please!!! |
Reviewed By: Bleryn On: July 19, 2003 18:56 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, this is a cool fic. But the thing is... if you have the chapters up to Chap. 9 typed, why don't you post them all? Are you polishing them or do you just feel like messing with us? |
Reviewed By: little miss crazy On: July 19, 2003 18:31 CDT Comment/Review: U HAVE TO CONTINUE! IM SO CURIOUS! DON DO DIS KINDA STUFF TO ME!!!!!!! U HAFTA HURRY! newayz ill be waitin! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ainokami On: July 18, 2003 20:51 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well if you love reviews then...I LOVE YOU! THIS STORY ROCKS! IT'S LIKE OMG! ::calms down:: i think i need to take a breather...not very often do i get to read GOOD fics...cause all of the other ones get in the way....((i write some of those...OTHER fics)) anyhows I LOVE YOUR STORY! and i think i can't wait for more...the excitement! oh yeah! |
Reviewed By: yuki On: July 18, 2003 17:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i think that ur a very good writer and that u should keep writing ... if sumone ever tries to bring u down they're just jealous .. well thats all i got to say for now..
~yuki~ |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:37 CDT Comment/Review: Just as spiffy as before!
Purple |
Reviewed By: Codie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 18:34 CDT Comment/Review: Shippo as a human..interesting twist definately. Except its still the same sad story. Well sorta.
Excellant updates
You have to update real soon again..please. This is very good.
good luck. |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 05:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey! Finish the Story! It's too good to not be finished! |
Reviewed By: Midnight Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 01:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great as usual.
Midnight Fox |
Reviewed By: Kiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 23:09 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awsome, awsome, awsome fic, this is one of the best fics I have read in a long time, please continue, it's realy amazing. |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 23:09 CDT Comment/Review: DUDE! kickin! i still love it! update soon, u have to!!! ^_________^
Purple |
Reviewed By: Hikaru-chan On: July 09, 2003 23:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Ja ne!
Hikaru-chan |
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