| "It's in the Family" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: December 07, 2004 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woh woh and woh! :)That is a fantastic chapter, GilShalos! I like it, i like it! :) Keep up the great work. I'll be back soon for the update. Thanxs again for keeping me well entertained. Ciao. Cristina.:)
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Title: Chapter 12!
Reviewed By: Cristina On: October 24, 2004 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! :) I enjoyed reading chapter 12, especially when you introduced a new, original character into your story! Thanxs for the update! :) Can't wait for chapter 13.. Keep up the great work! :)
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Reviewed By: star_fire04 On: October 18, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the update, it was great, i loved it. now i hope u will update again real soon.
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: August 27, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi again its me again, as i said earlier it is a great story but a real shame that you haven't updated...hope to see chapter 12 up and running soon...ciao for now.. :)
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: June 03, 2004 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanxs for the update! :) This chapter was very well done! :) I love the relationship developing between Orphen and Cleo, and Majic's brother...what a twist in the story, absolutely outstanding!! :) Keep up the great work!! :)
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Title: falcony32
Reviewed By: falcony32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. This is the only fan fic that I have actually reviewed more then once. Truly great work.
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Reviewed By: deivlgirl On: June 02, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the update it was really good and i hope that you will update it again real soon.
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: May 08, 2004 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, again another brilliant job GilShalos. I just got up to date by reading Chapter 8, 9 and 10. Absolutely brilliant! I'll be back soon to check on your Chapter 11 so keep up the great work! :)
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Title: Falcony32
Reviewed By: falcony32 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up yhe good work friend.
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Reviewed By: deivlgirl On: April 22, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u for the update and i hope that u update it again real soon.
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Reviewed By: deivlgirl On: February 13, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u need to updated it soon.its really good story so updated.please.
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: February 07, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I thought your first fanfic was excellent and that you wouldn't be able to top it. But you proved me wrong! :) Like your first fanfic once I started to read I just couldn't stop, and now you have me in suspense to see what will happen in Chapter 8. And finally what happens in the end. Keep up the brilliant work! :)
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Title: Speechless!
Reviewed By: Tingeta On: January 17, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say I'm speechless! I absolutely loved it! My favourite bit is seeing the characters evolve, growing up, but still staying the same, well you know what I mean. Well I can't wait to see what happens in the end. I can see I'm going to be still speachless..lol..Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Falcony32 On: December 14, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this is a very good story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: kmf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Apologies for taking so long to review this. Im so pleased to finally get a chance to read the first chapter in your sequel. Im really looking forward to learning more about what Cleo can achieve with her gift and more too about Alik. Majic's feelings were very understandable, and Orphen did a fine job of reassuring the lad. All in all a very nice beginning to what I hope is going to be another epic story ^_^
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