| "High School Sweet Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 05:40 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is good, its a good start anyway and it has potantial. i do think that youve fallen into the 'highschool hole' youve ead a lot of this style of story and now your strugeling to keep yours origionl. i know how hard that is. but your doing good anyway. just make sure that you know precisly where you want the story to go and what will happen to each of the characters. you'll do fine ~_^
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Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was really cool. UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: LiL me ... or was it someone else ? :P On: November 25, 2003 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEPPP WHY IS THERE NO ENDING ... >< me wanna know tha end :P really I just loveeeeee you're story ... pWease don't forget to update ^^ Bye and have fun typing tha story
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Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: October 18, 2003 08:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey man i was soooo dissapointed that u hadnt finished ur fanfiction .... but thats probably the only dissapointing part of your fanfiction ... its great and can u put bulma kicking marons ass!!!! woo hoo keep up the kewl work .. luv jane .. vegeta rockz
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Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: July 18, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great so far! When will Bulma's brother be in the fic? You should name him Trunks! I know that's Vegeta and Bulma's son's name. But this is fanfiction! LoL just a suggestion (Don't know if I spelled that right?LoL) anyway I love it so far! Hope you write more soon. Well c-ya ^_-* ~DB~ |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 10, 2003 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey don't forget o update I really love this fic!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 09, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDTE ITS GREAT!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 10, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this! its awsome! but..Bulma and Vegeta need to be in the same classes again. and why does every1 keep saying that Bulma is more then she seems? 17 said something about Bulma to Yamcha. i already forgot what he said haha and i just read it. oh well. keep the chapters coming please! thanx! bye |
Reviewed By: aquaprincess On: July 19, 2003 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story.. So who is the scary brother that she has? Please update real fast.. Oh.. And please tell me when its updated at:
fanfictionlover@hotmail.com |
