| "Violated" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: DBZCHiCK182 On: July 07, 2003 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kinda a bit on the over emotional side, but I like it... it's original. I like it how you didn't make Yamcha into this pushover, like he usually is put out to be |
Reviewed By: ~*Vegeta's_GURL*~ On: July 06, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far! WRITE MORE!! Okie doke? Good. Oh yeah is there gonna be anything happening between Vegeta and Bulma? I mean I know you said at the end that he "secretly" loves her and I was wondering if you were gonna elaborate on that |
