| "Chase the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: SNOWCUB On: November 09, 2003 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really liking this a Rei/Usagi story huh?
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Title: chase the moon
Reviewed By: distantskyking On: October 21, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey there that was very interesting i'd like to read the next chaps to so get on with it distantskyking
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Title: Chase the Moon
Reviewed By: Lesiaf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 08:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
C'mon! a little more please????
Where's the meatball head? |
Reviewed By: lesia On: September 03, 2003 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope to see this one updated soon with longer chapers because it sounds great! |
Reviewed By: raven(forgot the one i use when i am posting stories on here lmao) On: July 13, 2003 03:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol that was a great first chapter |
Reviewed By: darkblue1984 On: July 11, 2003 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more, this is a great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 04:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
You didn't tell me you were starting another fic! :P
It's looks good so far, just a couple notes to think about. The speed from the verbal beat-down by Artemis to the television room is pretty quick. And maybe you could add some more commas around the dialogue bits, like the last line, when Makoto is changing the channel. Makoto said, changing the channel.
E-mail or IM if ya see me on! :D
^The Firefaery^ |
