| "Lover's Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: lady victoria On: July 09, 2003 17:44 CDT
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It seems my last review messed up. Anyway, darling, this is a great story. Simply wonderful update. I told myself I said 'self', myself said 'hum', I said 'I know I am making the right decision when I declare Cherry "Writer for My Entertainment"' And myself said 'yep' and hear you are not making a lair out of me and making proud, very proud. So please update soon dear, thanksies. |
Reviewed By: Kitty Kat On: July 09, 2003 15:24 CDT
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Great fic! Um, I know it's a little late for this, but the icecream place is called Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlor. Just for future info! Well, anyways that was a great story! |
Reviewed By: Mental Mary On: July 09, 2003 15:13 CDT
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This is a great story so far! Just one little thing, its the Leaky Cauldron, not the Leaking Cauldron.
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Mental Mary On: July 09, 2003 15:06 CDT
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This is a great story so far! Just one little thing, is the Leaky Cauldron, not the Leaking Cauldron.
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: lizzarre On: July 09, 2003 14:13 CDT
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don't worry about what that meany head said about your story, I love it and isn't that all that matters, my happiness. And of course yours, //I guess//. But its really good and you don't have to worry about me flammin ya, 'cause your already on fire- this story is hot, hot ,hot. So please continue and don't let that flammer get to you ok- ^__________^ smile |
Reviewed By: lizzarre On: July 09, 2003 14:13 CDT
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don't worry about what that meany head said about your story, I love it and isn't that all that matters, my happiness. And of course yours, //I guess//. But its really good and you don't have to worry about me flammin ya, 'cause your already on fire- this story is hot, hot ,hot. So please continue and don't let that flammer get to you ok- ^__________^ smile |
Reviewed By: lady victoria On: July 09, 2003 14:12 CDT
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| Reviewed By: lizzarre On: July 09, 2003 14:07 CDT
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don't worry about what that meany head said about your story, I love it and isn't that all that matters, my happiness. And of course yours, //I guess//. But its really good and you don't have to worry about me flammin ya, 'cause your already on fire- this story is hot, hot ,hot. So please continue and don't let that flammer get to you ok- ^__________^ smile |
Reviewed By: diamond_hunter On: July 08, 2003 20:13 CDT
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weeeeeee! I love this fic. wraly I do wraly *did i spell that wrong- anyway you get the idea right?* If not let me make it simiple *clears throat* UPDATE SOON! pwease *giggles way girlishly* |
Reviewed By: lady victoria On: July 08, 2003 20:11 CDT
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*says in a stuck up ruler of england voice* yes darling- I do believe this story will suit my taste and believe me I have very picky and extremely valuable taste. Hence forth and for all etc. I dove thee writer for my entertainment. It is a rare and glorious gift. You should be above and thoroughly honored. Well......don't just sit there reading darling, get the writing- chop chop. |
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones On: July 07, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was verry good, and we hope you write more soon. |
Reviewed By: lizzarre On: July 07, 2003 15:15 CDT
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I love the way you updated so quickly. I wish there was more writers like you out there. We need good loyal, ontime writers with nothing else to do but write to their loyal reviewers and of course we need those people who have nothing else to do but read stories and be loyal reviewers, but without one there wouldn't be the other- right? right! so keep writing and I keep reviewing. |
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Another YGO/HP crossover. There aren't enough of them around, I'm afraid I'm utterly addicted to crossovers, but they have to be of a decent standard for me to be able to read them, just like this one, which is marvellous!
I love the Yugi, Ryou and Malik characterisations in here. Excellent. Also, the way you've written the relationship between Yami & Yugi was so sweet! *genki squeal*
I look forward to seeing how the yamis will react when their hikaris get hit on at Hogwarts. And boy will the Hogwarts cast be in for a shock....hmmn, I wonder how Severus will react. And is Harry smitten. Poor Draco when/if he finds out....Heh. ::wicked hentai smirk::
I adore yami/hikari pairings. They're just so yummy, especially the way you've captured their quirks, even with the little fundamental changes you've added.
Wonderful concept, having the sex twist.
Please hurry up and write more, I can't wait to read the next part.
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~ |
Reviewed By: lizarre On: July 07, 2003 10:37 CDT
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why that was good. very very good. I hope you update soon. And no I think the story will do absolutley(sp?) fine without a lemon. unless someone wants one. hope there will be a lot of jealously from the yami's. i love that. |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 00:43 CDT
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VEWY VEWY VEWY GOOD!!!!! I think Malik should be in Hogwarts; it'd kind of make sense (courage blah loyalty blah...) The whole taking over the world thing is all Marik isn't it? Question: how are the hikaris going to exist in the girl's dorm? And will there be a lemon? *Chibi puppy eyes* Pwease? |
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