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| "Lover's Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: Meepa(cause the stupid thing won't let me log in -_-;) On: September 27, 2003 22:25 CDT
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^_^ *snickers* I wish I had chibi eyes, so I could do that too.....I did make my dad think I was crying once, but he denied it after I started laughing......^_~ Update soon please! I'm now over the little 'hissey-fit' I was having earlier....;_; Though, I still am sad Sirius died.....he should've I tell you! *shakes fist* ~Cecilia
| Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 27, 2003 01:49 CDT
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that was still fun to read though - more soon please
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Reviewed By: Anime-fan Meepa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, I never give this low a rating, but 1) I'm in a bitchy mood, and I'm sorry, but...you're the 'kucky' one it seems...get to have me as a reviewer. and 2) Nearly half the stuff in here seems to be from another fanfic I read...I really don't know if you did it by coincidence, or what, but.....Is that new DA's teacher gonna be someone from the regular cast?? Cause if it is, think I know who it is, then this seems to close to be coincidence. I'm really sorry, if I hurt your feelings/offended you or anything, & you weren't copying her(I say this, cause she put hers out a loong time before the 5th book came out...like, she posted it last year...). But, I do enjoy this, just that, when is someone gonna figure it out that they're guys?? And, I'm not TRYING to put you down or anything, but....why does everyone have the hots for Yuugi? Yeah, he's cute 'n all, but...Fred, George, Harry, Draco, & many others? Again, I'm sorry, for the bithicness, but I'm sick right now, on a Friday no less! And I feel crappy. But regardless, I hope Yami, Bakura, & Marik cause hell for the hikaris...& When they find out they're guys, won't that be a shock??
Also(again), Yuugi & Ryou are feminine, but Malik....He's just a scary-ass skitzo. I think he'd stab anyone who'd call him a girl...though I do like the concept of crossdressing...*thinks more on that and salivates as well* Mmmmm.....Crossdressing..(sayd like Homer Simpson) But, I think I've ranted/bitched long enough. Ja.
~Cecilia | Reviewed By: fireshot On: August 21, 2003 15:13 CDT
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um yes it has been what a month since you updated and I believe you need to continue because I have been waitng too long and enjoying this fic too much for you to just all of a sudden stop writer, ok. So can you like continue or something. Write an authors note saying you will not be continuing, I mean something. But don't just have me coming down here to check and see if you've updated and you haven't, and its been a month, oh no, I want an update soon. OK. thank you. | Reviewed By: Utsukushii Ryu On: July 29, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's really good and really funny. I've never seen...or read...about Mafoy listening to someone besides the professors and his father. The way you described Yami, Marik and Bakura 'pouncing' on their light was really funny. They really can't keep their hands off of their kois, ne? And when they get jealous...! I just feel all goofy and I need to laugh really loud...REALLY loud. Please keep writing. I want to read it till the end, if it's not too much pressure on you. ^-^ | Reviewed By: Kat9 On: July 29, 2003 14:31 CDT
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there is the next chp *looks around and looks down and crys* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: lizzarre On: July 27, 2003 14:32 CDT
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thanks for updating, I thought you had stop writing. Please don't stop, and update soon K. | Reviewed By: Maryna On: July 26, 2003 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story, it is really cool, I love the houses you put them on, and the twists too.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
LIKE I SAID I JUST LOVE THIS STORY
~Maryna~ | Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 13:41 CDT
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Well, I can tell youwhythere are so many different Goddessess of love and beauty. You see, with the different cities in Egypt, each one had a slightly different view about religion and the begining of the earth. In some religions, Horus was the strongest god. In others, it was Osiris. There are many different beliefs from the early times, so it can get quite confusing. It also depends on who the lead priesthood was at the time, and who the pharaoh was too. So, in all actuality, all of the names you found were probably correct. Good on you! | Reviewed By: lizzarre On: July 18, 2003 20:06 CDT
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This is getting really good, update soon. *smiles* | Reviewed By: Sweet_Lover On: July 17, 2003 09:51 CDT
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Sweet: I WANNA SEE MORE OF THIS FIC!!!!!! PKEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!
Lover: *sweatdrop* stupid onna... *is mimicing Wufei Chang from Gundam Wing*
Sweet: *smacks Lover upside the head* Shut up. I know you liked the story too!!
Lover: Whatever. Still, Cherry, wright more so my sweet half will leave me alone. | Reviewed By: lady victoria On: July 14, 2003 22:18 CDT
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Oh darling, when I think things can't seem to get in better, you go in impress me again. I am in a complete stage of envy towards you. If I could write half as good as you, I would propably have gotten a higher grade on my writing exam. *sighs* oh well, some talents are just not given to those who need it most. Well, I looking foward to reading more and reading it soon. Thankies much, your such a doll. | Reviewed By: lizarre On: July 14, 2003 22:10 CDT
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Yeah, update. I love it, I love it, I love it. Sorry I can't tell you what kinda of house to put them in 'cause I have not the slighest idea as to what your talking about (I've never read or seen any of the Harry Potter books) so, sorry, but I can tell you that I would like to read a 'yugi catches yami cheating on him' story, but not with seto, maybe anzu, but only if it has no meaning to it- you know he doesn't care for her. N E ways update soooooooon! | Reviewed By: fireshot On: July 10, 2003 20:28 CDT
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*shouting mob in back* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE | Reviewed By: Child of Egypt On: July 10, 2003 10:10 CDT
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Oh, I am SO PROUD! I can't believe you accually used Auset insted of Isis! Auset is the original Egyptian way to say Isis! I'm going to be an Eygptologist, so I use the original names. I'm a full Egyptian. Call me odd, my life is still very much like that of my ancestors (dress, religon, lanuage, writing, ect.) I like your story. I normally don't like it when people make the characters gay, but I didn't seem to mind as much. Please continue. | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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