| "The Lost Consteallation" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kari moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot & everything,but I see why you asked people to keep reading even once they found out who Rinko was. MOST people (more than not) dislike Rini(don't believe me look at ratings for Supers season!) I really don't like her either, but I can take her sometimes. My favorite character is Hotaru(maybe she should be a seriyu warrior it fits her if you know what I mean!) & Rini/ and that's about it is my vote!
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Reviewed By: sinu On: January 30, 2004 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed your story update soon!
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Reviewed By: sinu On: January 30, 2004 10:26 CST
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Reviewed By: sinu On: January 30, 2004 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Name: Konako Age: 16 God: Seiryuu Gender: female Power: can control water Symbol: means water Profile: she's a cheerful person and likes to help, honest. with ninja like skills she follows all orders givin to her. She has waist bluish green hair,purple eyes, a perfect figure, her skin's a deep tan ( alittle darker then the Amiboshi and Suboshi), she wears clothes similar to Nuriko( the robe like coat with the pants underneath). She carries a(n) bow and arrow on her back, and can be seen always with a smile on her face even in battle.
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Title: ummmmm....
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 23:57 CST
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I'd like to give this a shot, but you seem to be missing chapter 1, even the story has ch 2 and 3, but no ch 1. oO I'm a bit perplexed
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