Reviewed By: FairysGift On: July 28, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice cliffhanger. But your story needs a bit of a boost because it's very boring and slow getting started but i'm sure you'll come up with some suggestions to make it more interesting later on. |
