| "The first stone" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor izayoi, for letting inu buy some rice it became her death, i think you should make a next chappie for it, about how inu now sees his realationship with kagome or something
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite well done, a poignant look at Inu's childhood. Your spellcheck had a problem with one word I noticed, the active form of "stare" is "staring", you have "starring" as "to star in a show". You have great promise, keep working on your technical aspects. Good work! |
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! Very touching and insightful. My daughter had a fit over it. |
