| "Space Ship Talk Show Anime" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: MajinVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Phantom_Renegade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 11:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ummmmmmmmm...okay unlike the other guy's review this one DOES involve u suk!dude!ONLY ONE EPISODE!AND IT WAS AS SHORT AS F*CK.It's got good stuff.But I think you should write it longer and btw it's OUR not ARE.Okay? |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh*
In order to have a story you actually need a plot... |
Reviewed By: James On: July 11, 2003 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow and I thought you couldn't write worse that this Dragon Ball AF thing you call a story.
Well I guess I was wrong, you obviously decided to give a new whole meaning to the term Abysmal.
By the way you seem to have problem with homosexuality, that kind of fic is often written by teenager who're in denial... Maybe you should seek counsellor's advices at your school. There's no shame in being gay you know. You cannot change what you are I guess. I wish I could give you advice how to deal with your sexual orientation, but I've never been attracted to men. Just keep in mind Love is love, no matter the genre or what stupid social convention said. So if you're homosexual that's fine with me, I just wish you'd learn how to write decent fic. |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 06:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
since you like flaming my fic so much, i thought i would give you an actual review. yeah, these things don't involve saying 'u suk' when done properly...
script format, with rare exceptions, is a bad idea. pleaes WRITE THINGS OUT. it's called description.
Secondly, have a point, other than wanting to post somethign with your name on it. i know it's hard to resist temptation. but ask yourself if you WANT people to think you wrote this. if the answer is no, then don't hit upload.
third, don't flame other people's fics to get attention when you are posting somethign new. I notice you flamed my fic for the FIRST time when you posted your FIRST fic, then you flamed AGAIN when you posted this one. maybe, if you actually developed yourself, you could get an audience and not have to rely on flaming other people. |
Reviewed By: Miyuka On: July 09, 2003 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um...was there suppose to be any point to this fic? |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm. I'm trying to think of something constructive to give you... How much of an idea do you have before you start writing and posting your fics? Perhaps you need to develop them a little more before you put them out there for the world to read. By all means, get a beta reader or two! If you truly want to develop writing skills, you need to do some serious work.
You don't understand the calibre of talent that the writers have that you chose to flame. It would be in your best interests to leave more uplifting reviews. If you don't have anything constructive to say other than the fic "sucked" which is only your opinion, why waste your time and bandwidth?
Good luck on the road to maturity. |
