| "Mikey B23's Hentai Story Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dude, I bow to you. I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but its great. Keep it up please. |
Reviewed By: Another Lemon Writer On: July 12, 2003 18:59 CDT
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If this is what you call twisted, "obsurd," sick, and vile, then I must assume you are very, very sheltered. |
Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great collection of hentai fics you got there...Only that each story is so short. You should make them longer. Not that you will, but still. |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 20:39 CDT
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Mikey B23 here!!
The title of this review says it all!!
This series of hentai short stories are going to be "sick....twisted.....obsurd....disgusting.....vile....hehehehehehe..oh well....enjoy them!!" lemons!!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!............................ |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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You do need to make it longer I understand that you don't like to get them but its just like one big cliffhanger. I like them there good don't take me wrong. |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn your last chapter was hot!!!! |
Reviewed By: bani On: July 15, 2003 00:49 CDT
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Hehehe. very.. nice.. lots of stories. :). anyway, great job and keep up the good work. please. :) |
Reviewed By: HentaiGuy100 On: July 15, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling errors everywhere, as well as grammatical, the stories are way too short, but I like your enthusiasm to get straight to the point, if this is supposed to be, Quote,"sick.......twisted......obsurd.......disgusting........vile.....", then you really need to get out more... (by getting out more, I mean renting hardcore porno movies) |
Reviewed By: sonadow freak On: August 25, 2003 10:37 CDT
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also soknux = sonuckles/sonux. these fics are too short and NOT as sick, twisted, or vile as some fics i read. for example, have you read 'Sonic kids Chronicles'??? also, your lemons have too little plot to call much of a lemon, its more PWP?! soz if this sounds like a flame, i have no intention of blaming the author for something i chose to read, but intend on giving an honest opinion. |
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